Forest Muse

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Thanks Nette for the inspiration. I wrote it to late to enter. Fall is my Muse.

Autumn is near ......a wild unbroken spirit
slumbers in the wind
Countless leaves tremble 
ready to tumble 
in ragged disarray,   
 Radiant light gathers
 spreads it's  amber glow 

at a silent signal - 
forest treasures flow
leaf gold confetti in 
unfettered  flight.

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Charles Messina

Date: 8/22/2025 1:44:00 AM

Very nice, SuZ, Congratulations on POTD!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/22/2025 1:22:00 AM

- A lovely Autumn poem, SuZ :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy :) - hugs

Deb M

Date: 8/22/2025 12:46:00 AM

Hey Suz....and its made my day you getting POTD my friend....a lovely poet and a lovely poem! Both deserving! Congratulations....Debx

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/22/2025 12:41:00 AM

A lovely poem Suzanne, congratulations on having received poem of the day… Beryl

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/21/2025 4:57:00 PM

What an elegantly flowing poem, Suzanne! The imagery was captivating. Just a delightful read! wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara FAVING

Deb M

Date: 8/21/2025 1:04:00 PM

Aww that's really really beautiful Suz ' a wild unbroken spirit slumbers in the wind' love that line! Debx

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/21/2025 2:03:00 PM

Great to see you, Deb. Made my afternoon to hear from you.

Tom Woody

Date: 8/21/2025 12:27:00 PM

Beautiful photo and poem Suzanne. Nice to see you inspired again

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/21/2025 2:04:00 PM

That means a lot, Tom Where would I be without words of encouragement. Thanks friend.