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Forest Cathedral

The silence calls out Green moss blanket warms the earth Time hangs suspended For Raul's contest..

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Date: 9/9/2009 2:52:00 PM
God speed in the contest. I can feel the silence and time hanging there. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/4/2009 4:33:00 AM
This is an absolutely beautiful Haiku Barbara. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2009 10:47:00 PM
Excellent interpritation , in perfect haiku , Barbara . Best of luck in the contest ....
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Date: 9/3/2009 12:52:00 PM
my silence calls out..and my time hangs suspended..i can relate to this haiku..excellent job--charma
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Date: 9/3/2009 12:22:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification for a creative perspective. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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