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Foreshadow

I Saw The Eagle float above The Bluff That He called home And When he turned And Soared away I Sighed, And saw the reason Why..... For on this bluff Above the river Now built into the cliff A House of sticks Resided where The Eagles Ruled .....Adrift

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Charlene Bird

Date: 8/2/2009 10:36:00 PM

Outstanding this is!!! Appreciated the eagle, his flight, and his home. Lovely!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/2/2009 11:14:00 AM

Wonderful write..the format matches the conent so well. BG

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/2/2009 10:46:00 AM

This is brilliant..love the form..the flow is rocking...thanks for the comments on my poems..well done.

Krista Kurth

Date: 8/2/2009 8:12:00 AM

James, I love the flow and feel of this poem. - and the multiple meanings in the word adrift. Well done. We need to protect the habitats of these amazing winged creatures. Check out my poem Adrift - a very different theme. Krista

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2009 3:23:00 AM

Love the expressivesness and descriptivesness of this one,James. My poem "Poetry In State Of Development" is an unfinished work about a lighthouse that was standing during the Civil War and still stands today but I am having trouble saying what I want to say. Might have to remove it. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 8/2/2009 12:07:00 AM

Excellent Jim,like the presentation a lot.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments