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Forecast

Today ...
Today the sun shined ...
Horizon-to-horizon it warmed, marrow and moat,
Tickling those things below that wait patiently for a turning.

       Tomorrow?
       Snow, so they say ...
       But as life, what tomorrow brings, only tomorrow knows,
       And perhaps hope lies waiting, trembling in cold soil.

Two-thousand-and-twenty is but a babe ...
And though it was brought forth in the brisk, biting breath of winter,
It holds the opportunity and prospect of the sun.
Long days always follow short,

              Cold always bows low to warmth and bloom,
              And while those white flakes may dust the air with crystals on the
                    morrow,
              Though hardship and challenge may place themselves under our feet,
              And the year start with ominous clouds of question and challenge,

They, too, are but ephemeral and brief,
And the day, AS the year,
Is what we make of it ...
The cold clay in our hands will warm to mold and ply,

              And the things we fashion are naught but as the weather -
              Limited ONLY by what we sculpt from it,
              What we envision and forge and spin to shapes 
              Upon imagination's wheel.

The forecast?
Widely scattered conceptions,
Hope and possibility on the horizon,
With a steady downpour of potentiality!

       One hundred percent chance ...
       Of life as we make it,
       And dreams ...
       As imagined.





Submitted on February 6, 2020
To the "Strand Select F Any Form Any Theme" Poetry Contest
Brian Strand, Sponsor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 2/7/2020 10:47:00 PM
Congratulations Gregory. Will have to read this over to let all of the images and wisdom sink in.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/7/2020 11:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam, I greatly appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Blessings, Friend! :o)
Date: 1/31/2018 4:44:00 PM
Hi Gregory, I just saw on Viv's blog that your lovely poem missed getting entered due to technical problems. I enjoyed your poem...so very deep and wonderfully expressed. Congrats on your nice placement! Sandra :) P.S. I wrote a poem for this contest, but forgot to enter it into the contest!!! :(
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2018 3:18:00 AM
That's very sweet of you, Sandra, and that means a lot to me ... blessings to you, Friend! I was about to enter it and lost wifi, then when I got wifi back, (Spectrum), it had closed, (within a period of about an hour), but Viv was kind enough to let me enter it anyway. I was very thankful, after a bit of frustration. I have ALSO written poems and forgot to enter them THREE times in a year, lol, so don't feel alone, Dear friend! :-) <3
Date: 1/31/2018 7:58:00 AM
Such a shame a glitch caused you to miss the contest ... its happened to me before. I'm so glad Mr Viv directed us to read your brilliantly descriptive poem and congrats on your placement:-) hugs jan xx
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2018 3:16:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Jan, that's so kind of you, My Friend ... blessings! :-) <3
Date: 1/31/2018 1:43:00 AM
I just read this over at his blog. YOu really did a fantastic job. Wow, Greg. Congrats to you!!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2018 3:15:00 AM
That's very kind, Andrea, thank you so much! I was about to enter it and lost Wifi, then when I got Wifi back, (Spectrum), it had closed, (within a period of about an hour), but Viv was kind enough to let me enter it anyway, and it got a second place!
Date: 1/31/2018 1:20:00 AM
Maybe too late for the ball, but still a worthy dance partner, Greg. Congrats on your 2nd place. Regards, Viv
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2018 3:14:00 AM
You are a good man, Viv, and I owe you one ... thank you SO much for taking my poem after the Wifi issue with Spectrum ... it seems to be a regular occurrence with them ever since it switched from Time-Warner. Blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 1/31/2018 1:15:00 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful Greg! You have written this like a master poet and it may not have made the list but it has certainly not gone by unnoticed! I am putting this remarkable poem into my Faves my friend! It is brilliant! : )
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Date: 2/1/2018 3:12:00 AM
Oh, that's so very kind of you, Connie, and I so appreciate it ... I was about to enter it and lost wifi, then when I got wifi back, (Spectrum), it had closed, (within a period of about an hour), but Viv was kind enough to let me enter it anyway, and it got a second place! :-) <3
Date: 1/30/2018 10:51:00 AM
Beautifully done Greg! A lovely read, left me sighing for spring and all its possibilities. This should place well, already a winner for me :) A lovely day to you my friend xomo!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2018 3:10:00 AM
That's very sweet of you, Mo, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it ... blessings, friend! :-) <3
Date: 1/30/2018 8:47:00 AM
Very deep poem Gregory...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/31/2018 9:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend ... :-)
Date: 1/30/2018 12:36:00 AM
Awesome ending, Gregory. Superbly done. GL
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2018 1:13:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Line ... that's very sweet of you, Friend! Blessings to you, someone who never fails to put a smile in my heart ... but then, I think you carry the sun on your shoulder! ;-) <3
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