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Forbidden Fuit

Nothing is as tempting As the flesh of forbidden fruit One bite, so succulent, so sweet tasting, Was enough for her to know That this was all she ever needed Past fruit that she had feasted on Could never, now satiate her Or fill her so wholesomely as this And having tasted it once She knew she had to have her fill As her lips felt the soft sensual flesh, She gave of herself completely And the doors of desire, that for so long Had been closed within her core, re-opened Allowing love to enter in once more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/2/2011 4:03:00 PM
* “Owww * How Your Lovely Beauty Stirs Deeply Ones Senses * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Janette * Chilled Amid The Cup This Fruit * Refreshing Unto The Heart Its Very Last & Delicious Bite * Seconds Please * Beyound Beautiful My Dear * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 3/9/2011 1:19:00 PM
beautiful sensual poem, I enjoyed the read
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Date: 3/8/2011 5:33:00 AM
Forbidden fruits we all love and desire to taste. Leaves the reader picturing blissful times Janette....:) smiles
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Date: 11/18/2010 8:20:00 AM
Hi Janette, Thankl you for letting us read your interesting and well written poem! Also I'd like to thank you for all your kind comments...Tc...Gert :)
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Date: 10/14/2010 6:44:00 PM
hi, Janette~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~ Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read many poems, before my crazy KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you poets. Have a wonderful night*luv~SKAT"
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Date: 10/3/2010 4:08:00 PM
Interesting write that leaves questions in my mind..At first I thought Eve but that is not the way that it ended...So questions..Sara
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Date: 10/2/2010 3:57:00 PM
Dear Janette, I am glad you are finding the time and the will to post again. This is lovely. I received the book and am enjoying it very much. I thank you for sending it. Am so sorry about your loss and it will take time, but it is good to keep busy. How is the home decorating coming? Hope you keep posting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/2/2010 2:21:00 PM
i have one named this ...again great minds ..but this is just so perfect xx sarah x
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Date: 10/2/2010 10:19:00 AM
Lovely and passionate Janette .. lovely lines in your free verse.. we all need to be careful of the forbidden fruit... enjoyed my friend. hope u are doing well..this happy weekend with luv..
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