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Forbidden Fruit: a Collab: Pc-Cd

The dancing flames lit up her hair In shades of dark and light She looked at me with longing eyes That sparkled in the night. I know, she said, what you desire The fruit that longing seeks She looked me straight into the eyes I watched her burning cheeks. I will give all and be your slave As long as you are mine We shall make love ‘til dawn is here And drink the sweetest wine. She threw herself into my arms And kissed my waiting lips I held her tight; could not resist Her undulating hips. Our passion’s fire burnt all night long Each movement – tenderness I wished this bliss we could prolong Profound togetherness. When morn’s first rays peered through the pane Lace curtains etched our skin A tapestry of silk domain She was my Anne Boleyn. But fantasies evaporate When light is shed on them Forbidden love seemed to berate How tarnished was our gem. One night we shared, but ne’er again Could we pursue our lust Her husband, he was my best friend We’d violated trust. ------------------------------------------------------------- Co-write: Paul Callus & Carolyn Devonshire ~ Oct 2014

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Date: 5/11/2020 2:59:00 PM
I see I've been here before... very sensual.... undulating hips are sure to cause trouble ;)
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/18/2020 5:30:00 PM
Thank you for revisiting this poem, Eileen:) Hope you're not working too hard! Hugs // paul
Date: 11/1/2014 11:58:00 PM
ah, the bittersweetness of that forbidden fruit. YOu did an amazing job with Carolyn. It always makes me so curious to know who was writing which parts!!
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Date: 11/2/2014 3:35:00 PM
Thank you Andrea....I too am curious to know if you made out who wrote which part! // paul
Date: 10/26/2014 5:15:00 PM
This is an amazing collaboration, sexy sexy sexy! Well done the both of you.
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/27/2014 9:01:00 AM
So pleased you enjoyed, Richard. Carolyn will love your comments, too! // paul
Date: 10/23/2014 1:01:00 PM
powerful piece of writing paul love how you both came together on this
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2014 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Liam. Co-writes are not always that easy to write, but if there is poetic chemistry between the partners, then the aims are reached (same can be said of your write with Charm!). With Carolyn it all comes natural. // paul
Date: 10/21/2014 2:52:00 PM
Dear Paul, Just want to thank you for co-writing with me. You always lead the way with your inspiration and it is a pleasure to write with you. It really does come easily for us. That's not always the case, so I am very thankful whenever we embark on poetic journeys. Imagination is a wonderful thing! Friendship is even better. Love, Carolyn
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2014 8:23:00 AM
Dear Carolyn, it takes two to tango! so it is only fair that I thank you for your contribution/s. Your pleasure is my pleasure and inspiration comes from both sides. Pity we did not catch this train long time ago! hugs // paul
Date: 10/20/2014 5:28:00 PM
Fabulous sensual collaboration Paul and Carolyn but such an unexpected twist at the end :-) hugs Jan xxx
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/21/2014 1:12:00 PM
Thank you from both of us Jan....somewhat different from what we're used to writing, but hopefully the message will come through. hugs // paul
Date: 10/20/2014 4:40:00 PM
Oh how passionate you two...ah the twist is nice....love it....Tim
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/21/2014 1:02:00 PM
Thank you for the feedback, Tim. So pleased you enjoyed. // paul
Date: 10/20/2014 1:40:00 PM
Am I reading someone's little secret? If so, I love how you share the guilt with someone else. ;-).
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/21/2014 12:51:00 PM
Hi Brenda...this is just imagination at work! But it is meant to show how betrayal, etc are liable to cause distress. Thanks for stopping by. // paul
Date: 10/20/2014 12:00:00 PM
Oh....wow.
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/21/2014 12:47:00 PM
Hi Eileen...understandable wow! Hope you got my soupmail:) hugs // paul
Date: 10/20/2014 10:37:00 AM
one word: bittersweet.
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/21/2014 12:44:00 PM
Hi!!! You are correct Olive_eloi...love has to be handled with much care and respect; this poem is meant to show how temptation, followed by the fall, can lead to bitter consequences. hugs // paul
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Date: 10/20/2014 11:31:00 AM
the flow good but the end is a tangled twist. . this a betrayal of friendship and cruel form of expressing affection as they are hurting someone and maybe they'll hurt themselves... love must be handled with so much care.
Date: 10/20/2014 10:15:00 AM
SweetCarolyn and Paul ,You make a great collaborating pair : )
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/21/2014 12:39:00 PM
Thank you Charm...we find it easy and enjoyable!
Date: 10/20/2014 10:10:00 AM
I was enjoying reading those romantoc verses ,but ahh how sour that twist in the end,and what a message it gives.The sin that gives pleasure and steals our purity without measure.I am favouring this beauty Paul.
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/21/2014 12:41:00 PM
Hi Charm...once again you visit with the most lovely comments; I appreciate that, as well as the fav....thank you:) // paul

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