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Quiet attraction your overwhelming elegance all I could do was sit there blushing could you tell? No chance in moving just to re-think the wanting of being elsewhere I needed one more look before I left I felt the feeling you wanted that too sadly head down due to having no view of you will next time be more difficult? Awkwardness in a room full of people now your work colleagues becoming aware it is not so quiet now Making tales in my head, multiple versions of the way we could meet In need of seeing you someplace else without eyes watching without the heat of embarrassment in waiting... for these thoughts to be said.

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Date: 2/28/2024 2:11:00 AM
This one plus the others videoed are excellent Lee. Did you engineer these videos as well as write and narrate them? Truly brilliant. So glad i watched them and more so listened to them. Thank you.
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Date: 2/28/2024 4:41:00 AM
So grateful for this message! I do, I've done others but always unsure how they're perceived, understatement, but a message like yours could give me the drive to continue as I enjoy the creative process. Thank you ever so much, it was lovely suprise to see this response.

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