For Too Long I Have Remembered You

There once was a time for us,
there once was a time.
A lone silhouette stays in the heart,
where love was, forever gone.
A tear lost in a falling stream of emptiness,
stained the face of loneliness,when love died.

For too long I have remembered you,
a memory that comes each day,
pouring over me, a waterfall,
washing away all reflections of what was,
cluttering thoughts of distant days,
that may or not have been real.
Like flocks of birds,
filtering through the sky of my mind,
diving in unison only to disperse,
among the fallen leaves that lay scattered,
where a heart once was.

Torn in half it lingers,
as dead petals do on the stem of a rose,
falling into an empty garden,
once filled with blooms,
chilled now by the wind of love's demise.

A heart alone with vanishing footsteps,
trailing away to a dull grey horizon.
Where the sun never rises, 
and the round sky rolls away,
leaving nothing... an empty space,
where beauty was,
before a heart was torn in half,
and found to wilt away on the conquered ground,
like a vanquished foe left bleeding on the steps,
that lead up to the throne of love,
where a heart once sat.



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/28/2016 8:38:00 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your 101 in a row contest win. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 7/27/2016 9:50:00 PM
Frederic, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my latest blog "THE REAL ME." Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/22/2016 11:40:00 PM
FREDERIC, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/13/2016 7:10:00 AM
Greetings Frederick. Congrats for your #1 placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:23:00 PM
Frederic, awesome win... :) SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2016 7:57:00 AM
Nostalgia brings back in place. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:14:00 AM
Very wonderful n emotive Frederic.. congrats on top podium!
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Date: 1/11/2016 8:38:00 PM
Congrats on first place. A beautiful read.
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Date: 1/11/2016 3:47:00 PM
What a wonderful poem, well done and congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 1/11/2016 2:16:00 PM
Many congrats on your well deserved first place, Frederic. Exceptional free verse! Elaine
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Date: 1/11/2016 1:17:00 PM
Congrats on your top win Frederic...:)
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Date: 1/6/2016 1:56:00 PM
the futility of love, the consequent impossibility--a theme not often explored, and the attendant conclusion of the near impossibility, with at least the promise of development--good for us, I'm sure, if we can face it. Here is writing that digs in for the long haul, and one cannot help but admire it!
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Date: 1/1/2016 3:53:00 PM
yes, now THIS is a free verse extravanganza. Love it!
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