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For the Prince and the Pauper

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It is what it seems - Another boy's dreams Of Ronaldo fame. His shirt is a shame, His goal is the same - True love for the game. March 16, 2021

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/31/2021 3:37:00 AM

wow; superb and expressive

Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/27/2021 10:04:00 AM

Thank you. M.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/28/2021 9:06:00 PM

Wow! Congrats on your win

Paul Callus

Date: 3/28/2021 12:42:00 PM

An excellent tableau in rhyme, Margarita. I agree that it's not the shirt that makes a player good, but his ability and love for the game! ~ Regards // paul

Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/27/2021 10:04:00 AM

Thank you. M.

Jcb Brul

Date: 3/26/2021 8:38:00 PM

So lovely! Congratulations on your top win with this powerful tableau.

Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/27/2021 10:04:00 AM

Thank you. M.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/26/2021 1:09:00 PM

Hi Margarita, You said a lot in a few words. Good description of the photo. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/27/2021 10:05:00 AM

Thank you. M.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2021 9:13:00 AM

I do not know anything about soccer, but I really like how you did this tableau. Congrats on the win

Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/27/2021 10:05:00 AM

Thank you. M.

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2021 5:58:00 AM

A dream for fame, Very nicely done Margarita, Congrats on your win..

Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/27/2021 10:05:00 AM

Thank you. M.

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/16/2021 8:24:00 AM

Nice one...and it's the truth.

Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/27/2021 10:05:00 AM

Thank you. M.

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/16/2021 7:15:00 AM

Five syllables per line and good rhyming. Good short poem about Ronaldo (who is he?).

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/16/2021 7:40:00 AM

About a boy. Ronaldo is a soccer star:) M.