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For the Prince and the Pauper

It is what it seems - Another boy's dreams Of Ronaldo fame. His shirt is a shame, His goal is the same - True love for the game. March 16, 2021
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Bangalee Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 3:37 AM
wow; superb and expressive
Lillico  Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Thank you. M.
Seeker Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 9:06 PM
Wow! Congrats on your win
Callus Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 12:42 PM
An excellent tableau in rhyme, Margarita. I agree that it's not the shirt that makes a player good, but his ability and love for the game! ~ Regards // paul
Lillico  Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Thank you. M.
Brul Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 8:38 PM
So lovely! Congratulations on your top win with this powerful tableau.
Lillico  Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Thank you. M.
Y. Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 1:09 PM
Hi Margarita, You said a lot in a few words. Good description of the photo. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Lillico  Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 10:05 AM
Thank you. M.
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 9:13 AM
I do not know anything about soccer, but I really like how you did this tableau. Congrats on the win
Lillico  Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 10:05 AM
Thank you. M.
May Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 5:58 AM
A dream for fame, Very nicely done Margarita, Congrats on your win..
Lillico  Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 10:05 AM
Thank you. M.
Michael Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Nice one...and it's the truth.
Lillico  Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 10:05 AM
Thank you. M.
Pettit Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 7:15 AM
Five syllables per line and good rhyming. Good short poem about Ronaldo (who is he?).
Lillico  Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 7:40 AM
About a boy. Ronaldo is a soccer star:) M.
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