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Phil’s caveman look is very weird He really should shave off his beard His mother is right He looks a strange sight The Neanderthal look’s to be feared! Since December Phil’s been hirsute He needs to give his beard a boot He’ll cut it off in the sink But his mum won’t cause a stink Cos without it he looks real cute! Poem Posted with Kind permission of Phillip Garcia To understand the poem please read my comments on Phillip's poem https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/3443_or_t_minus_44_880105 02~26~17

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Date: 3/5/2017 5:29:00 PM
LOL, hope he took the hint & got rid of the fungus
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/5/2017 5:41:00 PM
I hope so Jack I await a soup mail from his mum when the deed is done:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2017 7:53:00 AM
I agree with you, Jan:) lovely write:)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/5/2017 8:41:00 AM
I hope he shaves it off soon I am not a beard fan and he looks much more attractive without the caveman fuzz:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/28/2017 7:58:00 PM
It's fun to see your poetic conversation :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/1/2017 1:08:00 PM
It was lovely to join in the banter Agnes I do hope Phillip ditches the caveman look soon he looks so cute in his picture:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/28/2017 2:29:00 AM
Following this ongoing and growing line of poems to and fro with a smile :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/28/2017 3:52:00 PM
I'm waiting to hear from his mum when the caveman look has gone and she gets her handsome son back again:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/27/2017 6:02:00 PM
Methinks repayment cometh, my lovely friend. Thank you for inspiring me :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/27/2017 6:09:00 PM
LOL I can't wait to read it:-) hey the soup ladies say you look cute without the bum fluff - ditch that beard!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/27/2017 5:06:00 PM
this is another cute one, Jan. Love the ending, cos without it he looks real cute. I think he would look cuter without it too!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/27/2017 5:13:00 PM
I'll mail him and tell him the beard HAS to go - yes he sure looks cute without it and I am sure his mum would appreciate the yeti look gone:-) lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/27/2017 9:23:00 AM
You paint a picture with words that brings your poem alive and we can appreciate the humor of this situation. Emile.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/27/2017 10:39:00 AM
Thanks Emile I am grateful Phillip allowed me to post it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/27/2017 8:43:00 AM
This poem seems to be growing on me. :) Nice one Jan.
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Date: 2/27/2017 10:39:00 AM
ha ha ha Chris:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/27/2017 2:46:00 AM
- Amusing poem, Jan .... - But the hair has to go ... I agree with his mother :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/27/2017 4:31:00 AM
I agree with his mum the caveman look has to go:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/27/2017 12:13:00 AM
So cute...thanks for the laugh and for sharing, Jan. I had never read Phillip's poetry before, so I'm happy you led me to his page. :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/27/2017 4:32:00 AM
I couldn't resist writing the poem after the banter on the comments:-) I hope he does shave off the beard - am sure his mum won't mind the mess in the sink just to see his face again lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/26/2017 11:03:00 PM
I LOVE this!! You're the best Jan...thanks!! Lots of hugs! :) Diane
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/27/2017 4:35:00 AM
Let me know when it works!!! I can't wait to hear you got a messy sink full of hair and note saying Jan told me to do it!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/26/2017 10:36:00 PM
Jan a fun write...I don't like beards on men OR WOMEN!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/27/2017 4:37:00 AM
ha ha ha nor me lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/26/2017 7:18:00 PM
cute ! I like Tim's comment Hugs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/27/2017 4:41:00 AM
me too lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/26/2017 6:00:00 PM
LOL!! A 7 for sure, Jan! Janice
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/26/2017 6:06:00 PM
Thanks Janice Phillip was a great sport in letting me post the poems:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/26/2017 11:20:00 AM
Most don't look good in beards except my girlfriend : )
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/26/2017 3:30:00 PM
Did I tell you I'm legally blind : ))
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/26/2017 3:25:00 PM
lol:-)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/26/2017 3:17:00 PM
Don't kid yourself Tim. She doesn't look that good.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/26/2017 11:27:00 AM
ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 2/26/2017 11:25:00 AM
Good golly. There's like 7 amazing poems dying to be written from that little exchange between you two. Awesome
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/26/2017 11:21:00 AM
lol - got to admit I look a lot better now I've shaved mine off:-) hugs jan xx