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For Phillip and Diane Garcia - Ditch the Beard

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Phil’s caveman look is very weird He really should shave off his beard His mother is right He looks a strange sight The Neanderthal look’s to be feared! Since December Phil’s been hirsute He needs to give his beard a boot He’ll cut it off in the sink But his mum won’t cause a stink Cos without it he looks real cute! Poem Posted with Kind permission of Phillip Garcia To understand the poem please read my comments on Phillip's poem https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/3443_or_t_minus_44_880105 02~26~17

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Jack Horne

Date: 3/5/2017 5:29:00 PM

LOL, hope he took the hint & got rid of the fungus

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2017 5:41:00 PM

I hope so Jack I await a soup mail from his mum when the deed is done:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/5/2017 7:53:00 AM

I agree with you, Jan:) lovely write:)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2017 8:41:00 AM

I hope he shaves it off soon I am not a beard fan and he looks much more attractive without the caveman fuzz:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/28/2017 7:58:00 PM

It's fun to see your poetic conversation :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2017 1:08:00 PM

It was lovely to join in the banter Agnes I do hope Phillip ditches the caveman look soon he looks so cute in his picture:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

Date: 2/28/2017 2:29:00 AM

Following this ongoing and growing line of poems to and fro with a smile :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2017 3:52:00 PM

I'm waiting to hear from his mum when the caveman look has gone and she gets her handsome son back again:-) hugs jan xx

Phillip Garcia

Date: 2/27/2017 6:02:00 PM

Methinks repayment cometh, my lovely friend. Thank you for inspiring me :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2017 6:09:00 PM

LOL I can't wait to read it:-) hey the soup ladies say you look cute without the bum fluff - ditch that beard!:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2017 5:06:00 PM

this is another cute one, Jan. Love the ending, cos without it he looks real cute. I think he would look cuter without it too!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2017 5:13:00 PM

I'll mail him and tell him the beard HAS to go - yes he sure looks cute without it and I am sure his mum would appreciate the yeti look gone:-) lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/27/2017 9:23:00 AM

You paint a picture with words that brings your poem alive and we can appreciate the humor of this situation. Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2017 10:39:00 AM

Thanks Emile I am grateful Phillip allowed me to post it:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 2/27/2017 8:43:00 AM

This poem seems to be growing on me. :) Nice one Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2017 10:39:00 AM

ha ha ha Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/27/2017 2:46:00 AM

- Amusing poem, Jan .... - But the hair has to go ... I agree with his mother :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2017 4:31:00 AM

I agree with his mum the caveman look has to go:-) hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/27/2017 12:13:00 AM

So cute...thanks for the laugh and for sharing, Jan. I had never read Phillip's poetry before, so I'm happy you led me to his page. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2017 4:32:00 AM

I couldn't resist writing the poem after the banter on the comments:-) I hope he does shave off the beard - am sure his mum won't mind the mess in the sink just to see his face again lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Diane Garcia

Date: 2/26/2017 11:03:00 PM

I LOVE this!! You're the best Jan...thanks!! Lots of hugs! :) Diane

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2017 4:35:00 AM

Let me know when it works!!! I can't wait to hear you got a messy sink full of hair and note saying Jan told me to do it!:-) hugs jan xx