For Grandmomma Pt 2

Con't from Pt 1

At two years old your motherly instincts took me away./ What could my "mother" say,/ she 
was married to a man who had a violent hand./ I was too young to understand./ But being 
with Grandmomma was God's plan./ There was never a time I was too old for you to hold./ 
You protected me from abusive hands./ You would take beatings in my place from your old 
man./ Vile names would sting my young ears./ Your arms would comfort me and you would 
wipe away my tears./
     I remember as a child, Thursdays,/ being the best days./ A movie, then a toy,/ and ice 
cream could be no greater joy./ I was Grandma;'s boy/ You kept my belly full with home 
cooked meals./ You were the one who watched me ride my first bike without traiining 
wheels./ 
You use to tuck me into bed./ Read me a story and kiss my head./ The times I was sick with 
fever,/ you watched over me without catching a breather./
     For twenty-nine years your love was unconditional and without end./ You were not only 
my Grandmomma but my Mother, Father, my friend./ I pray my words spiritually reach to 
you beyond those pearly gates./ Because like in life, and in death, God had made us 
eternally Soulmates!/ I love you momma.....
 
Billie Jean Alexander Lopez     May 1, 1937-July 26, 2007
 
Note: I just finally finished this piece for my momma,  It took 2 years!
The form of poetry is "spoken work" Thought I would share this piece with you guys.
It's a deep personal piece and I hope it "reads well"   
                                                                         Jimmy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 1:27 PM
Jimmy, reminds me of my Ma , my best friend, who is still with us, tho Pop passed 7-yrs. ago, we called ourselves the 3-musketeers cuz we all 3 hung out together.....now jus' me & Ma....you wrote a beauty here Jimmy.....proud to call you my friend, jimbo
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Great work honoring a loving grandmother..I know that she appreciated the work if she ever saw it...Sara
Wilson Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 12:07 PM
Hi Jimmy..Went back and read this as you asked..it broke my heart but made me glad you had such a love for her as she did you..that deep kind of unconditional love is so rare and I'm glad you had it in your life...love,Deb
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December 18, 2009 at 11:14 PM
Your grandmomma did spoil you didn't she..?;)You had a hard background my as i can see Jimmy Boy,Indeed you made me go for tishoos whilst reading,You broke ny heart,Yet as it seems,grandmomma tried to steal you away from the hell of pain and give you a loving heavenly family..and this love she passes to you somehow is transmitted so deep in your poetry..This gem goes to my favs too,Ilove this grandmomma of yours too and here i say to her ,tnks Grandmomma for Jimmy,You did a good job..;)Charma
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November 11, 2009 at 10:34 PM
Very nice, Jimmy. Your poem reminded me of this story that I heard many years ago. Forever Families. Watch out, you might cry... I did.... again. (I hope you have computer access.) http://video.google.com/videosearch?client=opera&rls=en&q=lds+families+are+forever.&sourceid=opera&oe=utf-8&um=1&ie=UTF-8&ei=saf7SpjgCpPknAeAuqmZBQ&sa=X&oi=video_result_group&ct=title&resnum=4&ved=0CBMQqwQwAw#
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