Footprints on the Beach

I walk barefoot on the wet sand.
From afar I see the red sun setting.
Gulls still foraging for small fish.
Their cries harsh against the mist.

Where have my dear love gone?
Hidden in some obscure misty town.
She would not wish to be seen.
My life is like the waves that flow
Only to return from the darkening shore.

Once we were in deep love.
We held warm hand in a spring day.
We laughed and hugged and kissed.
Oh, how foolish I was that fatal day.
I sent her no red roses on her birthday.

Now I simply wile my evenings
Lurching unsteadily along the beach.
I am still bare foot on the wet sand.
Just one pair of foot prints left behind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Croft Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 2:31 AM
Beautiful and sad
Schiavina Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 7:12 AM
Absolutely beautifully said.
Kitchin Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 6:46 AM
Victor, a wonderfully penned sad and beautiful poem.
Jones Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 1:41 AM
This poem tugs at heart strings of angst. Well written/ beautifully executed .
Anaya Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 6:54 PM
Can we ever be free from the loneliness? Love, there is nothing like it. Evoking, imagery I can feel. April's blessings
Salehi Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 4:04 PM
Nicely done, Victor, sad but beautiful.
Buehler Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 3:35 PM
This poem is masterfully written. Its sad recollections of lost love are evoked in beautiful imagery. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 12:36 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Footprints on the Beach" write. Great picture you have painted with your words. It reminds me about the old "Footprints" poem that I love. Have a wonderful day writing away............
George Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 5:34 AM
In the place of two sets of footprints, now you see only one set. The realization that you are alone now makes you sad. Longingly you wish to go back to the times when you with your loved one strolled along the beach. Beautifully written, dear Victor.
Cunningham Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 1:07 AM
Quite an emotional write Victor, I could feel the sadness in your words. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 11:38 AM
I enjoyed this one. Nice ending on it with the one set of footprints instead of one. For melancholy tone
Proxenos Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 9:49 AM
I can't even begin to imagine how upset you were and now like all of us, one goes and the one that stays behind is the one who hurt lasts until the day they die, leaving one set of footprints in the sand, ver sad my friend Victor, but but very well penned. Hugs Jennifer.
Sands Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 6:51 AM
I felt like I was right there through your words. Well written :)
DiMino Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 4:07 AM
One pair of foot print...sad, true, in the end we are one pair of foot print, one soul alone before our God. Cherish what we have on this earth -- love is worth fighting for. Fascinating poem my friend.
Kendrick Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 3:43 AM
Ahhh!! A sad one, but what about forgiveness on her part because that has to be one trait in a relationship for it to survive. I like it though. A unique work to contemplate. Sara K
Neumann Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 1:14 AM
Sad story. I can relate very well. Did not even forget to send the roses. Kind wishes, Kai
Hind Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 11:28 PM
lonely poem of loss- beautiful work
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April 12, 2026 at 11:22 PM
Lonely the day, lonely the night, when one loses the love of their life, yet they leave their footprints behind, etched on your heart for all of time. A wonderful write Victor, take care… Beryl
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