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Footprints

Blue sky, honey rays, sonorous voice of the sea. Waves silently creep leaving slight spume, then slowly draws a breath, taking footprints into its deepness. 2/18/2020 Let The Pens Flow - Tanka Poetry Contest Oh No! Forgot and added an extra line in the verse .. 5 7 5 7 7 5 ( an N/A ) But that is ok, I got some fantastic inspiring complements and I thank you all for your kind words Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas

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Date: 2/23/2020 8:21:00 PM
exquisite Tanka Eve... you did a wonderful job with this one... hugs
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Date: 2/23/2020 11:25:00 AM
Beautiful imagery of waves breathing in footprints - I predict this will do well, Eve-
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Date: 2/21/2020 8:48:00 PM
oh my, my thoughts go to a dark place with this one. So maybe there are different ways to interpret this one and that makes it an awesome poem, Eve. I really like your tanka.
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Date: 2/21/2020 10:03:00 AM
Very nice one. I like it ...
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Date: 2/19/2020 9:06:00 PM
Very cool, Eve!
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