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Footle-Wind Poems

Wind chimes,
Soft rhymes. 




* for Brian's Contest

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

April 11, 2009 at 4:48 PM

I like this one. And I liek windchimes, too. Congratulations on placing in Brian Strand's April Footle contest contest.

Elizabeth Neal

March 24, 2009 at 8:03 PM

By far the best footle I've read. Beautiful work on this one.

Tyler Martin

March 23, 2009 at 11:19 PM

This one speaks volumes. You wrote a great poem in the footle form with this one. Tyler

Abe Lopez

March 23, 2009 at 3:57 PM

Nice footle, I love the way the wind uses chimes as an instrument to make its' voice heard.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 22, 2009 at 6:52 PM

Dear Raul, Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Brian's April Footle Contest ALWAYS...HG

Carolyn Devonshire

March 18, 2009 at 3:48 PM

Great footle, Raul! Love it! Carolyn

Sean Kelly

March 16, 2009 at 3:03 AM

Well done , Raul ... Great piece ...

Laurie Ginn

March 15, 2009 at 6:22 PM

Oh I loved this the first time I saw it. Nice job Raul congrats

Lena Townsend

March 15, 2009 at 6:05 PM

Oh, and congratulations on your win! LOL Smiles and chuckles from Lolita

Lena Townsend

March 15, 2009 at 6:04 PM

Oh, I love wind chimes! They play so many beautiful songs! Smiles from Lolita

Barbara Gorelick

March 15, 2009 at 5:46 PM

Sigh..I love wind chimes..conrats on your win Raul..well deserved. BG

Robin L. Gass

March 15, 2009 at 3:45 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brians contest, Raul! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

March 15, 2009 at 1:16 PM

Warmest congrats Raul on your well deserved win in Brian's contest! Love, Shar

March 15, 2009 at 1:12 PM

Love this the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the footle contest. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Carrie Richards

March 15, 2009 at 11:40 AM

Loved this one...a well deserving a win in the contest! ~Congratulatons, Raul! ~ love, Carrie

Amy Swanson

March 15, 2009 at 10:52 AM

Beautiful footle, so pretty and soft-sounding. :) Congrats on your win in Mr. Strand's footle contest! :) Love, Amy

Brian Strand

March 15, 2009 at 10:18 AM

Congrats on your success in my footle contest Raul.Rgds Brian

Daniel Neal

March 12, 2009 at 2:42 PM

Soft rhymes, a little masterpiece indeed. DN

Robin L. Gass

March 9, 2009 at 1:31 PM

Beautiful image with this one, Raul. A wonderful coice for Brians contest! Good luck! Love, Robin

Belinda Parish

March 8, 2009 at 9:48 PM

I love wind chimes and this little footle.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 8, 2009 at 2:24 PM

Dear Raul, Of Your last 3 posts all Footles this is best for Brian's Contest I'm sorry i have not commented to YOU lately Had a lot of catching up to do Have YOU read Barbara Gorelick's Footle "Learning to Ride" It's a series of Footles Could be a run for first place GOOD LUCK LOVEYOUr POETIC TALENT...HG

March 8, 2009 at 8:53 AM

I really like the whimsical feel of this poem. Nice way to incorporate nature and writing. Enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for the kind words on my poem. Have a nice day. Karen