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With Deep Sadness alone a stone With a Name Engraved my dad so sad I Fall to My Knees death sleep I weep Miss you Dad repose a rose A Red Rose oh years and tears I Love You, He Said last breath in death _________________________ March 3, 2016 Poetry/Footle/Six Sad Footles Copyright Protected, ID 03-763-811-03 All Rights Reserved, 2016, Constance La France For the Standard contest, March of the Footle, sponsor, Timothy Hicks, Judged 03/2016 Tenth Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 5:38:00 PM

Broken, Congrats on your fun footle win. Love LINDA

Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2016 6:31:00 PM

Linda, thanks for the congrats and the love ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 7:32:00 PM

a very well deserved win here, my friend . BIG congrats.

Constance La France
Date: 3/13/2016 7:43:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for the congrats, appreciate ~

Jack Horne

Date: 3/13/2016 4:27:00 PM

oh, so sad, but lovely x

Constance La France
Date: 3/13/2016 7:44:00 PM

Jack, thanks for visiting with the lovely !

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/12/2016 9:29:00 AM

Excellent--profound and moving. Janice

Constance La France
Date: 3/12/2016 11:42:00 AM

Janice, thanks for the excellent and the visit, appreciate !

Jan Allison

Date: 3/11/2016 5:32:00 PM

beautiful but sad footles Broken Wings congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 5:36:00 PM

Jan, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the congrats !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/11/2016 2:22:00 AM

Brilliant take Broken... congrats on great win with these lovely footles..

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 5:36:00 PM

Upma, thanks for visiting with congrats, appreciate !

Sam Jameson

Date: 3/10/2016 9:16:00 PM

Very densely written, Constance-- dripping with emotion. Congratulations on your placement in the contest my friend.

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 5:37:00 PM

Sam, thanks for the nice comment and the congratulations !

Lu Loo

Date: 3/10/2016 8:10:00 PM

oh Broken Wings, I am crying right now. I just buried my grandpa about 8 hours ago, and this really hits the heart strings. Well done and congrats on your placement :)-luloo *smiles*

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 5:39:00 PM

Laura, I am so sorry about your grandpa, I would tell you the pain goes away but it doesn't, thanks for visiting my poem with congrats, so appreciated !

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/10/2016 8:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings! I found your footle set to be very heartfelt, and emotional ... it was a more of narrative approach to the form. Your last footle topped it all off. Well done!

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 5:40:00 PM

Timothy, thanks for that great contest, and my placement, I know my footles were a bit different but I am so happy you decided to place them, I am honored ~

James Inman

Date: 3/9/2016 8:45:00 AM

These are beautiful, BW.

Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2016 9:51:00 PM

James, thanks for the beautiful !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2016 7:16:00 PM

EXCELLENT revision!! They are now perfect, Constance. I would be surprised not to see them on the winners' list.

Constance La France
Date: 3/6/2016 7:24:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for visiting with the excellent, I hope you are right, I worked very hard on these, who knew footles could be so difficult for a storyteller to do !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2016 10:01:00 AM

I liked these, Constance, the first and the last one were the best the way you rhymed on the emphasized syllables and made such profound statements with the short words. soupmail.

Constance La France
Date: 3/6/2016 6:12:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for visiting my footles so appreciated !

Paul Callus

Date: 3/6/2016 8:00:00 AM

Sad and heartfelt...but lovely. Some memories last forever! ~ Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 3/6/2016 6:29:00 PM

Paul, thanks so much for visiting with the lovely comment !

Justin Bordner

Date: 3/3/2016 6:42:00 PM

Irreplaceable love, irrepressible longing, so vivid yet silent in this poem Wings of Fire, and it tells me that when we reflect upon what we've lost, we also recall what was gained, and that spirit remains deep within...J.A.B.

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 1:06:00 AM

Justin, thank you for that beautiful comment, it touched my soul deeply !