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Footle-Bonnie & Clyde

too snide both died Note A footle-2 lines,2 syllbles with a title-Light verse form,witty,pertinent,topical etc (technically a trochaic monometer)hence I label the form as a footle best exampled by the famous FLEAS Adam had'em.

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Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/18/2009 2:40:00 AM

Awesome! The form and content. now, here my day will be spend thinking up footle's! love, Kristin

Elaine George

Date: 1/17/2009 2:51:00 PM

You teach me again. Thank you. I will see what I can do. Love and peace, Lainie

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/17/2009 2:46:00 PM

Oh dear. For me I fear the shorter the poem, the more difficult it is. Great job Brian. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/17/2009 8:22:00 AM

Another fun form to try! I will have to turn off my Lanterne obsession and try something new! Loved the Bonnie and Clyde quip!! and thank you for placing my Lanterne in your contest!! ~ Sincerely, Carrie

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/17/2009 7:53:00 AM

Awesome write. It amazes me that only four words can speak such volumes. The note is wonderful, as well, a good learning tool for those like me who have much to learn! Thank you for your well wishes and the oppotunity to be part of your contest. I will be working on the sonnet, now that I know. Love, Robin