Sara Ella Poet Free verse

Food For Thoughts

Dark are the voices in my head
Haunting words
Darkness fed
It is a familiar food
Dark chocolate for a better mood
It is my own
This- I'm no good
Nights I'm rolling lolling
Echoes extolling tolling
Can I find an end?
This trend is understood

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Funom Makama July 12, 2017 at 10:13 AM Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page. Sara Ella July 12, 2017 at 5:26 PM Thank you Funom :)

Lisa Ricci July 8, 2017 at 4:31 AM Good Morning Sara. Oh the ever powerful mind that whirls all around. Well done and stated. I hope this day finds you well. Sara Ella July 8, 2017 at 11:52 AM Good Morning and thank you Lisa :) The sun is shining!

Eileen Manassian July 7, 2017 at 4:22 AM I know what this feels like! Sometimes it's hard to want to go one...chocolate sure helps. I've had to give it up since going vegan. Now THAT is hard. ;) Great write. Sara Ella July 7, 2017 at 10:22 PM Thank you Eileen :) No chocolate - now that would be hard!

Charlie Smith July 6, 2017 at 7:57 PM Better chocolate than booze, I suppose. Then there's the dental bills... Well done Sara, I enjoyed it almost a much as a triple mocha fudge sunday. Sara Ella July 6, 2017 at 8:17 PM High Complements Charlie, Thank you! :)

Chris Green July 5, 2017 at 6:47 AM They say there is no sad mood that chocolate can't make better. At least for a little while. These were some really well written and sweet thoughts my friend. Sara Ella July 5, 2017 at 9:38 PM Thank you Chris :) Chocolate is an AWESOME distraction <3

Darren White July 5, 2017 at 6:36 AM Food for thought. It rhymes my friend :) You worded that rolling around so well with that assonance. <3 Sara Ella July 5, 2017 at 9:35 PM Thank you Darren :) It just sorta happened that way and now I know what to call it. :D <3

Andrea Dietrich July 5, 2017 at 12:09 AM A dark food indeed, Sara. We need you to think thoughts of white chocolate. but sometimes I like a dark poem like this one just as well!! Sara Ella July 5, 2017 at 12:19 AM Thank you Andrea :) White and Dark chocolate - it's all good! <3

Daniel Turner July 4, 2017 at 1:08 PM I love chocolate but think I'll stick to my cheesecake:) unfortunately eating does not cure depression, if it did I would never be depressed. "Sweet" write, Sara:) Sara Ella July 4, 2017 at 11:34 PM Thank you Daniel :) I would put cheesecake with the chocolate and be VERY happy :D

Lin Lane July 4, 2017 at 12:42 PM Anyone who loves chocolate of any kind must have some great thoughts inside their head. Dwell on those and "Eat more chocolate." Sara Ella July 4, 2017 at 11:33 PM YES! Chocolate diet makes a good day! :)

White Wolf July 4, 2017 at 10:27 AM Understood till the very last block! LOL!!! Definitely food for thought this one, Sara! But I'm a white chocolate guy! (not really) Loved it! And the cyclothymia me agrees! Sara Ella July 4, 2017 at 10:32 AM Ha! White chocolate, milk chocolate-it is all good! :D Thank you Rick <3

Tim Smith July 4, 2017 at 9:56 AM Time will take you to a better place where Cotton candy smiles are all around ...happy fourth Sara Sara Ella July 4, 2017 at 10:00 AM Happy Independence Day Tim :) <3