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Following Prompts - clockwork

Write a “how-to” poem about something you don’t know how to do - building a watch In the beginning there are pieces Already there, scattered on a table My beginning is to sort them Time is spent creating groups There's logic from outside to inside On the outside, in the still of the second You'd never know what doesn't work Teeth need to match teeth Turns need space and wisdom Compress that wisdom into the space Ensure the moving parts translate externally Once it's all turning test against a measure Timers for hours or eggs Cogs and wheels, rods and pivots I don't know what makes it go Nor do I have instructions I perhaps shouldn't have faith But I do when nothing else makes sense

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Date: 3/4/2024 1:24:00 AM
Leave them pieces long enough and they will arrange themselves Dilly, after all that’s the way the cosmos assembled itself from a primordial soup of hydrogen, before we were born, although perspectively to us it happened instantaneously, so keep that faith when nothing else makes sense, Dr manhattan’s father was a watchmaker, and passed down the skill, that’s how he recombobulated himself from mere atoms after a nuclear accident, you’re on the cusp again, brilliant, cheers David
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Date: 3/4/2024 5:21:00 AM
Hey I'm all smiles! I'm not sure why I picked the prompt then picked watch building out of thin air - just was something I didn't know how to do but like the idea of describing. I love the links you've made from my poem, I hadn't put them in of course but they correlate beautifully. I might use this prompt again as it does allow the mind to just meander and it's fascinating how anyone ever figured this kind of thing out. I suppose it all starts out simple in the beginning :)

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