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Follow the Fire

Hidden, the smoldering fire of rage sparked, searing the sanctity of my soul darkened my view of every day deepened the belief I’d ne’er be whole. The fire craved release, not reclamation, for it had torched the innocence of youth ignited an incendiary need to torch all those who hid behind lies truth. And yet the fire purified its gold although the burnished soul was ne’er the same for deep within the embers sadly wails a soul that hadn’t sinned yet bore the shame. So do not judge its anger without pause for soul’s are often shaped by evil’s claws. ©12/10/2022

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Date: 12/19/2022 11:25:00 AM
An amazing sonnet of faith and poetic artistry John. Every line so carefully composed. Every image so carefully honed and all underpinned by scripture. You take us from the hopelessness of Eden to the ultimate hope of the Resurrection. This is a fav for me. Congratulations. Merry Christmas. Blessings of peace and joy for the new year.
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Date: 12/18/2022 8:07:00 PM
"So do not judge its anger without pause for soul’s are often shaped by evil’s claws" - Very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/18/2022 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara
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John Lawless
Date: 12/18/2022 5:55:00 PM
Thank you Sara, it was an interesting contest theme.
Date: 12/18/2022 1:28:00 PM
You have followed the fire of your souls dear poets. Your poems did capture my soul and set it all aglow. Thank you for joining my contest, Congratulation, dear poets !
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John Lawless
Date: 12/18/2022 5:53:00 PM
Your invite spurred the interest of the muse so I was bound to set her musings loose. Great topic/theme for a contest, so many avenues of thought awakened.
Date: 12/10/2022 3:28:00 PM
A brilliant sonnet, Dear John! Enjoyed every line. Best ~ Mala
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John Lawless
Date: 12/18/2022 5:54:00 PM
Glad you liked it Malabika, thanks for stopping to read and comment

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