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follow me across barren land where unnamed streets etch a path to a town unborn watch the nearby hills come to life beneath the whisper of gentle wind their silhouettes reflecting the golden hues of day their dance as gentle as summer's breeze follow me down cobblestone streets forming in the distance as frames of wood take shape beneath the sledge of hammers echoing the screams of protestors trying to save what little beauty remains follow me along the banks of streams where deer come to drink and racoons frolic and play in the confines of space remaining follow me down memory lane where wooded lands and wildflowers flourished nourished by the rain as it fell all around follow the drop of rain as it lands upon the velvet petals then trickles down reclaimed by the roots of what existed before houses took shape follow the trickle of rain as it streams towards edges of creeks already overflowing with rain unclaimed follow me down paths of destruction as toppled buildings lay in ruins as the floods reclaim the land follow me across barren land where named streets etch a path to a town destroyed

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Date: 10/11/2023 1:17:00 PM
On my VERY short list of anyone worthy of reading!
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Date: 10/10/2023 7:08:00 AM
I enjoyed wandering down this path. Well done, you have a fabulous imagination.
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Date: 9/26/2023 5:35:00 AM
Lovely penning Sandra, full of great imagery and insightful line of thought. Great to have you back again, trust all is well with you. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 9/25/2023 9:47:00 PM
Beautiful poetry! Loved how you did this!
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Date: 9/25/2023 7:14:00 PM
Sandra, this is a brilliant poem packed with amazing imagery! You really took me on a tour with this one. Congratulations on your top win in my contest. I'm so glad you're back!
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Date: 9/22/2023 4:24:00 PM
Beautiful, relevant write Sandra Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/22/2023 11:29:00 AM
Oh gosh, everything was so paradisaic till those last two stanzas. I thought of the U2 song - Where the streets have no name, but these streets have names, just no occupants. Awesome twist
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Date: 9/21/2023 6:39:00 PM
Surely poetic in nature. Covers much with your creativity.
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Date: 9/21/2023 10:37:00 AM
"Dear Sandra, deep and moving poem . Congratulations on your win! Blessing
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Date: 9/21/2023 3:40:00 AM
Love this writ well deserved win, and i love how you’ve written so many lines in this especially “ follow the drop of rain as it lands on velvet petals” what a poetic line that is, left me in awe , just amazed! Sad how so much has happened in this world so many buildings destroyed etc, the harsh reality, that needs to be heard and read about so well delivered. You truly are a gifted poetess. Absolutely loved reading this. Flows seamlessly with so much depth and imagery:
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Date: 9/20/2023 2:41:00 AM
Yes. It’s sad to see so much of God’s creation reworked by man’s sometimes fickle imagination. So sad and disturbing. God bless you sweetheart. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/19/2023 12:37:00 PM
Seems like it will be a long journey if i follow you, so I should come prepared.. joking inside.. this is a deep analogy expressed so poetically.. you create imagery in your poem going through so many different phases and places.. an interesting ending to your poem...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/19/2023 2:11:00 PM
they keep building on every plot of ground they can, the animals have no where to go, yearly the bears are roaming yards looking for food before hibernation, the highways are littered with animal carcasses and the rains flood the local creeks worse and worse each year... so many houses sit destroyed from the last one...i didn't know where my muse was heading...but i guess as long as she's heading somewhere it's a start thanks for coming along the journey and the coaxing... maybe she will further wake from her slumber
Date: 9/19/2023 11:04:00 AM
Sixth stanza is a knock out!! So good to read you again, SA. :-))
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/19/2023 2:12:00 PM
thank you so much Arlo, my muse has been in a slumber and is waking here and there! hugs
Date: 9/19/2023 9:45:00 AM
I have long got used to your style of writing which I admire so much. I tend to be verbose. Your imagery is first class.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/19/2023 2:12:00 PM
what a sweet thing to say, thank you Victor my muse is slowly waking from slumber

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