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Copyright Protected, 09-1577-159-08
AllRights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, September 08, 2023
For the International Contest, This or That, Vol.20
Sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 09/20/2023

Second Place

follow me into a lush dreamy jungle dripping, steamy and sultry I am one with nature and with a drifting green stream and the soft moss and the wet ferns follow me . . . and float in tranquility beneath us water reeds sway and roll oh, so many hues dwelling in harmony juniper, sage, olive, blue, pine, blue, purples and pinks see the sweet emerald green of a little frog small little yellow fish kiss our toes follow me . . . a lovely pink flower dips into the green stream an orange snake slithers quietly a purple butterfly flutters by a blue bird sings sweetly green twining vines meander in the dark foliage my sage eyes whisper fall into the lush depths with me I will take you to a world full of utter peace where all beautiful shades of nature, mingle and entwine follow me . . .

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Date: 9/25/2023 7:33:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem with amazing imagery, Constance:-). I love it. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 9/26/2023 11:09:00 AM
Edward, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate.
Date: 9/24/2023 7:15:00 AM
Peaceful and serene Constance. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/24/2023 8:16:00 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations.
Date: 9/11/2023 3:20:00 AM
What a lovely invitation! I wish to follow you into the heart of this verdant jungle where umpteen scenes await and dulcet songs wait to titillate the ears! Beautiful, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/11/2023 3:13:00 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the comment and the compliment.
Date: 9/8/2023 3:07:00 PM
Lovely and descriptive!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/9/2023 3:56:00 PM
Abdullah, thank you so much for the compliment.
Date: 9/8/2023 10:44:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Nice Iamgery.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/9/2023 3:57:00 PM
Jay thank you so much for the compliment and comment.

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