Foliage Afire

The very first week of every October
Bright yellow, orange, amber, purple and red
Splash artistry on New Hampshire’s White Mountains
As the tourism season comes to a head

North Conway’s old railroad station is abuzz
Men in traditional conductor attire
Escort sightseers to seats with pane-free windows
To peer out at landscapes in colors of fire

The spectrum on dappled mountains evokes awe
Caught by camera lenses as cool winds blow
Offering a chilly reminder to all
That these peaks will soon be blanketed by snow

Clickety-clack, the train hugs its aged track
Freeze-frame photograph images will remain
Recalling the splendor of fall’s peak foliage
Until spring breathes life to the mountains again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 6:39 AM
And what a lovely season to pick for this train journey. I bet it's sure wirth seeing >> James
Mannan Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 3:32 AM
What a lovely picture you have painted. Loved the sheer colours of this poem. many Congrats for this win.
Johnson Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 9:55 PM
What a nice peek into the picture of this old train and its trip through fall. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Amelia Harmon's contest "Fall". Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 5:57 AM
I've been on this ride with a beau. It was a wonderful adventure I wish we'd gone farther. You capture it well! Congrad's on your win! Light & love
Neels Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 4:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Carolyn, hope you will enjoy the day ahead, love Wilma
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 11:05 PM
congratulations, CArolyn. I really liked this one. LUv, Andrea
Haick Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 10:14 PM
Congratulations on your HM for this beautiful story, Carolyn. ...I enjoyed the imagery! Love, Audrey
Roberts Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 6:09 PM
good one , congrats on your HM in the contest
Gorelick Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 3:49 PM
Yes! I knew this poem would be in the winners circle..Lets go see the foliage some time..Love, and congrats. BG
Richards Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 3:04 PM
I remember loving this one when I first read it...and here it is in the winners circle! Congratulations!! ~ Carrie
Hornschuch Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 1:06 PM
simply put, Beautiful.....
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 12:14 PM
Carolyn, What a wonderful entry and a joy to read. Autumn is my favorite time of year and I love reading poems that express its beauty as this one does. I am sure to see this poem in the winner's circle.
Strand Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 6:22 AM
Sounds idyllic Carolyn.rgds Brian
Nandy Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 12:34 AM
CAROLYN , THIS IS A VERY WELL CRAFTED POEM ABOUT THE 'FALL' ! Thank you for your comments on my Inca love poem ! The other poem about Inca mail courier service is also interesting , if you have the time . Best wishes , - Raj
Taylor Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 8:47 PM
Outstanding, Carolyn. Enjoyed. Great trip Have a super weekend. XXX Ralph
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 8:18 PM
This is wonderful descriptive writing, Carolyn. I would sure like one like this if I were doing a contest on fall. LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 6:47 PM
Soup mail, Carolyn
Haick Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 4:45 PM
It sounds like a very nice trip to take, Carolyn, especially in autum-our favorite season! Here in the tri-state I enjoy autum. And New Hampshire's the place they say, for scenic views of the leaves turning. Have a good weekend! Love, Audrey
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 4:38 PM
This is a very beautiful autumn poem. You should do will with this one in the contest. It makes me want to ride the North Conway train. Lovingly, Your Friend, Dane Ann
Gorelick Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 4:07 PM
Oh, I want to go ride this train! To see the fall foliage is on my bucket list. Great piece LNC. BG
Murphy Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 2:08 PM
very nice good luck in the contest and thank you so much for your comments have a great weekend faleshia
Kendrick Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 12:31 PM
Great descriptive and educational write.I prefer fall vacations where the air is cool and light.Autumn adorns the hills and vales with ballroom gowns of flashing colors..Enjoyed the reading of your work.Thanks for stopping by commenting on my work; for the offer offer to reopen your contest but I did not write that as an entry.It just came to me and I just penned it off the top of my head without counting to see if everything was correct; trying to improve the quality of the word patterns.Sara
Neels Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Wow Carolyn, how I'd love to take that trip, with the awesome images you brought across in this write.. Best wishes for the contest.. How is your weekend going? Love Wilma
Brown Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 5:12 AM
You take me there with this lovely wrtite - captivating.
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