Foliage Afire

The very first week of every October
Bright yellow, orange, amber, purple and red
Splash artistry on New Hampshire’s White Mountains
As the tourism season comes to a head

North Conway’s old railroad station is abuzz
Men in traditional conductor attire
Escort sightseers to seats with pane-free windows
To peer out at landscapes in colors of fire

The spectrum on dappled mountains evokes awe
Caught by camera lenses as cool winds blow
Offering a chilly reminder to all
That these peaks will soon be blanketed by snow

Clickety-clack, the train hugs its aged track
Freeze-frame photograph images will remain
Recalling the splendor of fall’s peak foliage
Until spring breathes life to the mountains again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/5/2010 6:39:00 AM
And what a lovely season to pick for this train journey. I bet it's sure wirth seeing >> James
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Date: 9/3/2010 3:32:00 AM
What a lovely picture you have painted. Loved the sheer colours of this poem. many Congrats for this win.
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Date: 9/2/2010 9:55:00 PM
What a nice peek into the picture of this old train and its trip through fall. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Amelia Harmon's contest "Fall". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:57:00 AM
I've been on this ride with a beau. It was a wonderful adventure I wish we'd gone farther. You capture it well! Congrad's on your win! Light & love
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Date: 9/1/2010 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Carolyn, hope you will enjoy the day ahead, love Wilma
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Date: 8/31/2010 11:05:00 PM
congratulations, CArolyn. I really liked this one. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM for this beautiful story, Carolyn. ...I enjoyed the imagery! Love, Audrey
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:09:00 PM
good one , congrats on your HM in the contest
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:49:00 PM
Yes! I knew this poem would be in the winners circle..Lets go see the foliage some time..Love, and congrats. BG
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:04:00 PM
I remember loving this one when I first read it...and here it is in the winners circle! Congratulations!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/30/2010 1:06:00 PM
simply put, Beautiful.....
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Date: 8/30/2010 12:14:00 PM
Carolyn, What a wonderful entry and a joy to read. Autumn is my favorite time of year and I love reading poems that express its beauty as this one does. I am sure to see this poem in the winner's circle.
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Date: 8/29/2010 6:22:00 AM
Sounds idyllic Carolyn.rgds Brian
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Date: 8/29/2010 12:34:00 AM
CAROLYN , THIS IS A VERY WELL CRAFTED POEM ABOUT THE 'FALL' ! Thank you for your comments on my Inca love poem ! The other poem about Inca mail courier service is also interesting , if you have the time . Best wishes , - Raj
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Date: 8/28/2010 8:47:00 PM
Outstanding, Carolyn. Enjoyed. Great trip Have a super weekend. XXX Ralph
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Date: 8/28/2010 8:18:00 PM
This is wonderful descriptive writing, Carolyn. I would sure like one like this if I were doing a contest on fall. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/28/2010 6:47:00 PM
Soup mail, Carolyn
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:45:00 PM
It sounds like a very nice trip to take, Carolyn, especially in autum-our favorite season! Here in the tri-state I enjoy autum. And New Hampshire's the place they say, for scenic views of the leaves turning. Have a good weekend! Love, Audrey
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:38:00 PM
This is a very beautiful autumn poem. You should do will with this one in the contest. It makes me want to ride the North Conway train. Lovingly, Your Friend, Dane Ann
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:07:00 PM
Oh, I want to go ride this train! To see the fall foliage is on my bucket list. Great piece LNC. BG
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Date: 8/28/2010 2:08:00 PM
very nice good luck in the contest and thank you so much for your comments have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 8/28/2010 12:31:00 PM
Great descriptive and educational write.I prefer fall vacations where the air is cool and light.Autumn adorns the hills and vales with ballroom gowns of flashing colors..Enjoyed the reading of your work.Thanks for stopping by commenting on my work; for the offer offer to reopen your contest but I did not write that as an entry.It just came to me and I just penned it off the top of my head without counting to see if everything was correct; trying to improve the quality of the word patterns.Sara
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Date: 8/28/2010 8:42:00 AM
Wow Carolyn, how I'd love to take that trip, with the awesome images you brought across in this write.. Best wishes for the contest.. How is your weekend going? Love Wilma
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Date: 8/28/2010 5:12:00 AM
You take me there with this lovely wrtite - captivating.
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