Fog

Appears a ghostly vision, fog in from the sea.
As if sentient in movement,  shrouds all in it's mystique.
With a cyclop eye, lighthouse lends a mournful wail.
While specters breath dampens all, your marrow the chill impales.
Out of sight, crashing waves, sound loud as if they crawl,
following the living mist, as it breaches the seawall.
Seeping round panes and doors, into every crevice.
The very air liquefied, a grey oppressive presence.
Wood smoke blends it's flavor, to the tang of the air.
In hopes the flames beat it back, keep tendrils from drawing near.
Slowly fog tastes it's fill of wooden planks and blood.
It leaves a sodden salt strewn smell, seeming to just dissolve.
Folding back on itself, returning to the brine.
Fog waits yet another morn, to return to shore and dine.


"Your Best Poem" contest
Placement: 2nd place

Featured poem of the week ending 
Oct. 31, 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/23/2011 3:17:00 PM
There was a movie with Adrienne Barbeau called "The Fog". This took me back to that movie. Great poem. Vince
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Date: 10/25/2010 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2010 7:44:00 PM
love this spooky poem, congrats on having it featured this week
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Date: 6/13/2010 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry in the contest. . I have been gone so am late with my congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/11/2010 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations Paula....I can see why this was selected as one of the winning poems....Wonderfully written! ~ Carrie
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Date: 6/10/2010 6:53:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your win in Mac's contest for the best poem.. this one was an excellent entry.. enjoy another win my friend.. with luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/10/2010 6:37:00 PM
Congrats on the 2nd place win, Paula
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Date: 6/10/2010 6:19:00 PM
Wow- almost creepy. Great write and congrats!
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Date: 6/10/2010 6:07:00 PM
Paula, Congratulations on your 2nd place win. A wonderful poem...the imagery is outstanding.
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Date: 2/19/2010 1:08:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Paula.Rgds Brian
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