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FOCAL POINT should we focus on his nude frame - so muscular, so prominent, private parts an extension of his serpentine scarf or the ruddy lyre, with its cheeky color, plucked by rapturous fingers or the unbridled wildlife, pointed precariously at pulses of vulnerability, sensuous and sadistic the pink flamingo, ready to cobra-strike at his curvy buttocks the king of jungle lore, ready to take his namesake, to render him an eunuch the wart-ridden crocodile breathing on his achille’s tendon, prepared to wrestle him to the ground, as this god-like man’s potency slips away remaining calm, his finger psalm lingers. he waits for the danger to abate perhaps this harp of hell, must continue on and on, unrelenting his suit of flesh, perfectly manicured, never to touch another virgin he bows, his self-erected shame immortal, in pain 10/10/2017 Poems that paint a picture - 4 Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 10/14/2017 1:17:00 AM
Kim , I love the flamingo ready to pinch his curve butt :-)congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2017 6:47:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 10/13/2017 10:36:00 PM
Kim - congratulations on your well-written win, my friend - nicely done! :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2017 6:47:00 AM
Thank you, Greg!
Date: 10/13/2017 5:39:00 AM
This is a deep poem, with some great descriptive lines, like the third and fourth stanza... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2017 7:02:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One!
Date: 10/10/2017 12:00:00 PM
A unique take on the tale--the image in painting well described in detail--best for a win, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2017 12:09:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!

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