Focal Point

FOCAL POINT

should we focus on his nude frame -
so muscular, so prominent,
private parts an extension of his serpentine scarf

or the ruddy lyre,
with its cheeky color,
plucked by rapturous fingers

or the unbridled wildlife,
pointed precariously
at pulses of vulnerability,
sensuous and sadistic

the pink flamingo,
ready to cobra-strike
at his curvy buttocks

the king of jungle lore,
ready to take his namesake,
to render him an eunuch

the wart-ridden crocodile
breathing on his achille’s tendon,
prepared to wrestle him to the ground,
as this god-like man’s potency slips away

remaining calm, his finger psalm
lingers.  he waits for the danger to abate

perhaps this harp of hell, must continue
on and on, unrelenting

his suit of flesh, perfectly manicured,
never to touch another virgin

he bows, his self-erected shame
immortal, in pain

10/10/2017
Poems that paint a picture - 4
Sponsor: Silent One
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Roper Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 1:17 AM
Kim , I love the flamingo ready to pinch his curve butt :-)congratulations on your win hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 6:47 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 10:36 PM
Kim - congratulations on your well-written win, my friend - nicely done! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 6:47 AM
Thank you, Greg!
One Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 5:39 AM
This is a deep poem, with some great descriptive lines, like the third and fourth stanza... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 7:02 AM
Thank you, Silent One!
Pandit Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 12:00 PM
A unique take on the tale--the image in painting well described in detail--best for a win, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
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