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Flying From the Nest

i know you must fly from that nest that housed your body and soul for those eighteen long years from which you always looked out while your mum and i kept that constant flying in, to protect and strengthen every feather in your wings to take off one day to find a partner to make your own nest in that process of my constant flying in for such an enormous extended time i have lost my sight beyond that nest in which i also had lost my soul that cradled your most beautiful being making all my flying and fruit gathering now, utterly meaningless, tearing my heart multiplying my tears to endlessly flow while i struggle, in my mind, to let you go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/18/2014 8:14:00 PM
You are not wrong Andrea! I am naturally empathetic and I am also trained, for many years, in that skill. You too, as a poetess, have that skill to see the embedded in my "flying from the nest". Thank you for feeling the feelings and for your time. Good luck for your poetry.
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Date: 3/18/2014 5:56:00 PM
such a sensitive feeling poem. It must be that time of your life!!
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Date: 3/18/2014 10:20:00 AM
wow, no matter what! you are ready for life and to move on. hugs. Skat
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Henry Victor
Date: 3/18/2014 10:40:00 AM
Oh yes SKAT! I keep moving ... I keep writing ... I keep sharing ... I keep listening ... I keep loving ... I keep receiving. Thanks for your offering ... Have a good day.

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