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Flying Clems

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afraid of nothing

fly swatter at the ready-

the cockroach has wings

 

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afraid of nothing fly swatter at the ready- the cockroach has wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Funom Makama
Date: 12/18/2018 10:47:00 AM
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Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/18/2018 1:09:00 PM
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Wow, Funom, I don't know what to say except your emotional response to my poem has left me gobsmacked. Thank you my friend! ~Mark
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/7/2018 10:40:00 PM
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Hmm, I think you will need a bigger fly swatter- perhaps something to trap this Roach with wings. Yikes!! :) Thanks for the smile this evening Mark. ~ Brandy
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/8/2018 12:20:00 AM
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Lol... You are very welcome, Brandy :) Thanks for stopping by. ~Mark
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Harry Horsman
Date: 12/6/2018 6:15:00 AM
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They certainly do, need to sneak up behind them, Mark. love the twist.
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/6/2018 8:32:00 AM
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Harry, thank you for stopping by with your kind encouragement and good advice! ~Mark
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/5/2018 5:24:00 PM
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GREAT third line twist!!!
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/5/2018 5:36:00 PM
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Why, thank you, Andrea! ~Mark
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2018 5:03:00 PM
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Good that you are ready. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/4/2018 11:51:00 PM
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Sara, thank you for your gracious comment. Best wishes to you and yours. ~Mark
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Constance La France
Date: 12/4/2018 2:49:00 PM
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Mark, a fun write, I saw some huge cockroaches in Miami once upon a time ~
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/4/2018 4:17:00 PM
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Lol... and lived to tell the story :) Thanks, Constance. ~Mark
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2018 8:05:00 PM
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LOL! i first experienced those in Hawaii! A real eye-opener and screamer!
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/2/2018 9:43:00 PM
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Lol... Screamer for sure!

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