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The apparition of these faces in the crowd of the wonderful trapeze artist as he swings and flies unbound so many faces in the crowd children trying to see around every head turns and sways like the soft music from far way as they watch in dismay this beautiful artist on display. Line 2- Ezra Pound T Reams 7/24/2015 Contest: Complete the lines 8th place

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Date: 8/5/2015 8:52:00 PM
I enjoyed what you did from seeing the first line, Tammy . congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/8/2015 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Andrea for the nice comment.
Date: 8/5/2015 1:27:00 AM
this somber piece really soared, tammy.. best congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 8/5/2015 6:36:00 AM
Thank you Nette. It's nice to be back and writing again.
Date: 8/4/2015 12:43:00 PM
Very creative write after this first line (which I also used). Congrats on your win, Tammy :)
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Date: 8/4/2015 2:36:00 PM
Thank you Laura for the nice comment.
Date: 8/4/2015 12:56:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Tammy! Wonderful imagery!
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Date: 8/4/2015 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma for the wonderful comment!
Date: 8/4/2015 12:46:00 AM
Tammy, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/4/2015 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Skat for nice comment!
Date: 8/3/2015 10:17:00 PM
Tammy, congratulations on your win a 7 good write. Hugs eve
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Date: 8/4/2015 9:01:00 AM
Thank you Eve for the wonderful comment and the 7!
Date: 8/3/2015 4:55:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/4/2015 9:02:00 AM
Thank you Jan! Hugs back to you.
Date: 7/24/2015 8:39:00 PM
A very clever story you wove in so few lines Tammy - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2015 10:29:00 AM
Thanks Jan for the comment. Happy I can do some more writing.

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