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Fly Away Ladybird - Free Verse Contest

How about some free verse That’s what Kim is asking for Whatever my heart desires What more could I ask, I know Love maybe, so over subscribed Nature is the same, hmm How about the red ladybirds In my garden they have a home Did you know that from 2 spots To 22 are on this little bug Love to see them when in flight When sent home with a shake In my eyes she is a friend Welcome whenever she likes Making sure a silver birch In the garden is kept just as she wants. “Fly away ladybird Fly away home. Your house is on fire your children are none” Penned 28 May 2013

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Date: 5/30/2013 9:50:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations with your awesome winning free verse poem... xox~ LINDA
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/1/2013 5:06:00 AM
thank you Linda ....Seren
Date: 5/29/2013 9:09:00 AM
Nicely done and congrats on your win. Love the little ladybugs and when I rake the leaves I am always trying to leave them in the grass. One bug that I like and I think is pretty.--if you can call a bug pretty LOL--or I should say colorfully decorated. love phyl
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/29/2013 3:28:00 PM
Hi Phyl, yes they are pretty things, have you seen the black ones with red spots, variation on a theme lol. Thanks for the comment....Seren
Date: 5/28/2013 9:24:00 PM
congrats on your win Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/29/2013 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Joseph ...Seren
Date: 5/28/2013 6:55:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest. take care cory
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2013 7:28:00 PM
Hi Cory, many thanks ....Seren
Date: 5/28/2013 6:48:00 PM
Very well done and very clever mentioning my name in it. Congrats and thanks for submitting. Kim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2013 7:28:00 PM
Lol thanks Kim....Seren
Date: 5/28/2013 11:31:00 AM
This is a phenomenal and wondrous write my friend! You have written a delightful poem here Seren! I really loved reading your fun loving ladybird piece this afternoon! What a masterful free verse, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2013 7:29:00 PM
Hi Russell, thank you ...Seren
Date: 5/28/2013 7:54:00 AM
Nicely penned Seren.....love those ladybirds....best wishes in the contest...
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2013 7:29:00 PM
Thankyou Joseph ...Seren

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