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mottled burgundy and orange decorate the neighborhood park today mingled with the yellow, red, gold leaves like stained glass fluttering in decay ______________________ October 22, 2022 Poetry/Quatrain/fluttering decay All Rights Reserved, ID 10-1496-256-22 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere Choice sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 10/23/2022 Third Place

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/25/2022 12:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Constance, beautiful verse. Many blessings friend

Constance La France
Date: 10/26/2022 6:20:00 PM

Eve, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings

Valsa George

Date: 10/25/2022 3:27:00 AM

Beautiful image of autumn in cryptic form ! Congratulations Constance on your great win in Brian's contest...

Constance La France
Date: 10/25/2022 7:01:00 AM

Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Beata Agustin

Date: 10/24/2022 10:55:00 PM

Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing this... so colorfully fascinating, along with the photo. God bless you.

Constance La France
Date: 10/25/2022 7:01:00 AM

Beata, thank you so much for the congrats and compliment, blessings

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2022 7:40:00 AM

On, and big Congratulations here

Constance La France
Date: 10/24/2022 10:56:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much for the congratulations, blessings

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2022 7:39:00 AM

I like that contrast of beautiful colors yet decaying. Nicely written, Constance. My footles did not cut it this time with the sponsor. i am at a loss!

Constance La France
Date: 10/24/2022 10:55:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, blessings (we ever know what a sponsor will like)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2022 2:14:00 AM

- A beautiful and colorful picture with your words, Constance - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Constance La France
Date: 10/24/2022 10:56:00 AM

Sunshine, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Charles Messina

Date: 10/23/2022 6:39:00 PM

A unique description of stained glass, but absolutely picture perfect! Best wishes in the contest, Constance...Charlie

Constance La France
Date: 10/24/2022 10:57:00 AM

Charles, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and encouragement, blessings

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/23/2022 11:27:00 AM

Well caught! Aloha!

Constance La France
Date: 10/24/2022 10:58:00 AM

Rico, thank you so much for the compliment, Aloha and blessings

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/22/2022 10:45:00 PM

Oh, and thought I should add, it is in my Faves! We don't have a true autumn like this. When I was very young and lived in New York, one of my first memories was the fall. I remember the leaf piles in the front yard all raked up, and me and Cousin Johnny threw ourselves into the great big joyful pile and my big brother was madder than a hornet after we had a blast throwing leaves into the air, rolling like puppies!! The air was brisk, You have blessed me with a wonderful memory <3 FAVE!!

Constance La France
Date: 10/24/2022 11:00:00 AM

BJ, thank you so much for the FAV, appreciate, and your comment reminded me of those does of jumping in the leaves, they had a certain smell, that is divine, blessings

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/22/2022 10:35:00 PM

Oh my goodness, so pretty!! I love this poem, and the image is breathless!

Constance La France
Date: 10/24/2022 10:58:00 AM

BJ, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, blessings

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 10/22/2022 7:13:00 PM

Absolutely stunning imagery. Appreciative for this share, thank you!

Constance La France
Date: 10/24/2022 11:01:00 AM

Kyle, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings