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bird fluffed against cold gold outline 'pon the dark fence.... a rising sun

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Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/18/2022 9:27:00 PM

Every shiver will receive a warm blanket!! I just loved the hidden message!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/19/2022 8:59:00 AM

Thank you, Swetha. I appreciate your visit. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/18/2022 5:27:00 PM

LOve the visual here, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/19/2022 4:31:00 AM

Harry, I am glad that you love it. Your visit was inspiring. Sara

Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/18/2022 2:43:00 PM

What a delightful image! Enjoyed your Haiku. Sincerely, Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/19/2022 4:31:00 AM

Brian, Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/16/2022 3:29:00 PM

Hi Sara, Your poem and photo went together very well. I enjoyed the read. Have a nice day-Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/18/2022 6:08:00 AM

Why, thank you, Alexis. I appreciate the nice review. Sara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/16/2022 12:12:00 PM

Beautifully crafted, I can see those fluffed feathers, the puffed breast, against the chill; wonderful imagery.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/18/2022 3:56:00 AM

M.L., I am glad that you can see it. Another cold nip is coming through this weekend. I guess the birds will have to handle the cold once again. I can feel the northerly breeze coming through the door. Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 2/16/2022 11:53:00 AM

The poor bird fluffed against the cold attracts our sympathy; fortunately you provide him with the warmth of a rising sun, Sara! ~ Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/18/2022 3:49:00 AM

Paul, Sometimes I wonder how they can make it, but they do because God created them to make it. Your visit was uplifting. Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 2/16/2022 8:15:00 AM

Gorgeous image of the owl, Sara. I enjoyed your Haiku. Smiles and Blessings, Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/18/2022 3:33:00 AM

Thank you, Bill Baker. The smiles made my morn. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/16/2022 3:31:00 AM

Very fond of owls, this one appears to have a halo. All the birds are quiet today, we have had high winds throughout the night and they are still buffeting away..Delice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/18/2022 3:31:00 AM

Delice, I am glad you feathered the storm. We had winds last night and Hairy did not deal with it very well. Your visit was encouraging. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/15/2022 8:53:00 PM

Your deliciously creative poetry brings out the perfect early sunrise with a spring morning fast approaching which one can see vividly with the souls inner eye. Lovely imagery. Hugs and blessings Jennifer

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2022 3:58:00 AM

Thank you, Jennifer. Seeing with the soul's inner eye. I like that . Your visit is encouraging. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/15/2022 6:22:00 PM

Sara, Your poem was quite enjoyable to read. Amazing photography captures the ideal dawn scene at its most beautiful.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2022 3:53:00 AM

Lasaad, Thank you. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Sara

John Lawless

Date: 2/15/2022 1:35:00 PM

a perfect sunrise moment captured in magnificent imagery

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2022 3:47:00 AM

Thank you..Your presence here made my morning brighter. Sara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/15/2022 12:50:00 PM

This is quite a beautiful image; easily visualized from the poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/15/2022 2:56:00 PM

M. L., So sad it wasn't an owl, and I really could not make out the species of bird that was on the fence this morning. I think maybe a house finch or sparrow. About all I could see was dark and a lot of fluff. Thanks for the visit to my page, you always encourage me. Sara

Jeff Kyser

Date: 2/15/2022 9:31:00 AM

i can see it - nice!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/15/2022 2:52:00 PM

Awesome that you can see the scene, Jeff. Your visit was enjoyable. Sara