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Fluff

I lay on the bed idling my time,
My husbands in the bathroom he’s doing fine.

He comes to bed and slips under the covers
We lay together we were going to be lovers.

I let my fingers walk across his midriff,
They fell in a hole as big as though off a cliff.

The good thing I found even though in a huff
They had a soft landing with all the belly button fluff.

Copyright © Mandy Tams The Golden Girl | Year Posted 2012

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Samual Ronthorpe Date: 2/10/2012 1:47:00 PM Awesome write Mandy. Congrats on your win in carol's contest. I always enjoy reading your work. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/10/2012 12:08:00 PM Congratulations on your placement in my "FLUFF" contest Mandy. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/10/2012 8:01:00 AM congrats Mandy on an excellent win for this touching fluff luv.. Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 2/10/2012 2:06:00 AM Mandy congrats on your great win..liked it first time..David Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 2/9/2012 6:04:00 PM Congrats, Mandy. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going. luv Ralph Login to Reply

Lizanne Scholtz Date: 2/9/2012 4:33:00 PM Congratulations on your win Mandy, love Elizabeth Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 2/7/2012 3:27:00 PM seems like we are just like washing machines, we have a fluff collecter.... great piece of poetry here xox Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 2/6/2012 5:17:00 AM Mandy when we were kids my brother would put a plaster over his belly button to keep it dry in the bath as he thought it was there to protect his belly button..idiot..ha ha .. best of luck..David Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/6/2012 5:50:00 AM Hi David , its a good job there is such a veriety of us to make up this world, that is so funny xx

Black Eyed Susan Date: 2/4/2012 8:49:00 AM ha! funny entry for the contest! i'm sure carol will love this -how innocently your fingers are walking then whoosh, into a hole! thank goodness for that fluff ;p Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/5/2012 2:23:00 AM Hi Susann and thanks missed your comments xx

Lisa Cooper Date: 2/4/2012 8:07:00 AM lol I love this. Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/5/2012 2:22:00 AM Thanks Lisa nice of you to comment much appreciated promise willl check out some of yours later xx

Harry Horsman Date: 2/4/2012 5:44:00 AM unusal subject, wonderful imagery, and a brilliant mind to pen this. harry. Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/4/2012 6:23:00 AM To many compliments but i love . Thank you so much wish others thought I had a brilliant mind, good job I know it and now you do ah ah. Keep your chin up xx

Greg Stanley Date: 2/3/2012 11:33:00 AM Oh how romantic and funny too, nicely done, all the best in the contest, Greg Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/4/2012 2:33:00 AM Thanks Greg and for taking the time to comment x

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/2/2012 6:26:00 PM LOL a contest on belly fluff? hmmmm Light & Love Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/3/2012 1:29:00 AM Go on debbie admit it you have some somtimes... thanks x

George Aul Date: 2/2/2012 1:24:00 PM In golf terms, its a belly button divot....... George Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/3/2012 1:28:00 AM Will check the divot later George xx

Jack Horne Date: 2/2/2012 1:17:00 PM LOL, had a good chuckle, Mandy. Many congrats on your wins : ) Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/3/2012 1:27:00 AM Thansk jack xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/2/2012 8:46:00 AM so cute and clever Mandy.. picturing the scenario and smiling.. good luck in the fluff contest.. reads like a winner to me luv.. Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/3/2012 1:26:00 AM Ta xx

Mike Dailey Date: 2/1/2012 5:44:00 PM It is funny how different writers handle this subject. You did a good job with this one and it should do well in the contest. Mike Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/2/2012 2:24:00 AM Horses for courses mike x

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/1/2012 4:18:00 PM this is SO cute, Mandy!!! I was thinking of doing the belly button fluff myself. YOu did it GREAT. Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/2/2012 2:24:00 AM Go ahead I would like to see someone as crazy as me xx

Tony Lane Date: 2/1/2012 12:46:00 PM My brother used to lay on his back, fill his belly button with salt and dip celery sticks in it. Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/1/2012 12:51:00 PM I hope you didn't take a bite !! x

Lizanne Scholtz Date: 2/1/2012 12:38:00 PM good entry with this creative write Mandy, best wishes Elizabeth Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/1/2012 12:51:00 PM Thanks Elizabeth x

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/1/2012 12:27:00 PM Thank you Robert.x Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 2/1/2012 11:32:00 AM Nice to read. Simply written and easy to understand while having no trouble conveying clear images to the reader's mind. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/1/2012 11:10:00 AM charming me all the way, mandy... ohh, talk about navels!.. winning;s best!..:) huggs! Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/1/2012 12:29:00 PM Thanks nette xox