Flows Like a River

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ within my DNA strand culture flows like a river ancestral essence

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Date: 2/24/2024 12:09:00 PM

A lovely use of metaphor in this equally lovely Senryu, Sara. Love, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/24/2024 5:11:00 PM

danke, Bill! du bist der Beste, hugs!

Date: 2/18/2024 11:18:00 AM

And culture is very important, especially understanding all beliefs... Its nice to have an open mind... nicely done dear..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/18/2024 5:05:00 PM

awww, thank you! Appreciate your visit and comments!

Date: 2/17/2024 7:59:00 PM

Wow. Awesome take on DNA's essence. Super senryu, Sara. ~ Alliterative Alan

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/18/2024 4:30:00 AM

thanks goodwill Gershon...It's national alliteration day, right? thanks for stopping by, Sara