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Flowers, Champagne, and Candles

As each day comes and goes, You mean more and more to me. For the life we’ve spent together, Is exactly what I planned to be. You fill my heart with joy, You mean everything you say. And I love the way you look, For you bless my everyday. I wouldn’t change it for the world, Without you my life’s in shambles. For this day I will treat you to, Flowers, champagne, and candles.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/9/2009 7:07:00 PM
This is so wonderful and sweet, very intimate and compassionate, it comes straight from your heart. All the best to you and your special love...Lovely piece*Tyesha
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Date: 1/6/2009 6:29:00 AM
AWE SO ROMANTIC-GREAT JOB, RAUL!!THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS!
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Date: 12/28/2008 3:15:00 AM
Awe, so romantic, the love flows from your heart, through your hand, to the page. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 12/28/2008 1:47:00 AM
Great poem Romeo I mean Raul. I didn't realize you was that sensitive. She's a lucky muse. Caramel
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Date: 12/28/2008 1:07:00 AM
Wow, this is a touching piece. It is cleverly written and I like the way it ends, it says it all. DN
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Date: 12/28/2008 1:00:00 AM
Actions are better than words although she'll like this poem for sure Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 12/27/2008 7:03:00 PM
WOW!!! What a lucky girl. Not only flowers, champane and candles, but a poem to treasure and hold to the heart forever. Well done! Raul. And thank you for your kind comments on my writing. It means a lot to me. Lainie
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Date: 12/27/2008 5:58:00 PM
damn raul, wish i could find a guy who was that romantic. great poem
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Date: 12/27/2008 5:38:00 PM
The lucky girl that gets such romance!! ~ Said nicely, Raul! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/27/2008 5:06:00 PM
hi Raul, welcome to the soup, you have joined while I was away for a while, this is such a beautiful and loving tribute, filled with romance, passion and love, take care D-nyce
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Date: 12/27/2008 12:35:00 PM
Raul this poem is a beautiful testament of your love - Great job - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/27/2008 9:26:00 AM
What an uplifting view on love. Flowers, champagne and candles--I say she'll be impressed. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind words regarding mine. Have a wonderful New Year! Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 12/27/2008 6:02:00 AM
This is just beautiful, Raul. "For you bless my everyday" is my favorite line but it is all wonderful. Your love should feel treasured by this loving write. Love Robin
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Date: 12/27/2008 5:39:00 AM
So happy for you! And yes, there is no doubt she is quite the lucky lady. So sweet! You are a true romantic! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/27/2008 4:10:00 AM
Awwww, what a lucky lady. Too sweet. love, Kristin
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Date: 12/27/2008 2:12:00 AM
A very romantic write, lucky someone.....Happy New Year, always, Christy
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