Flower In Transit

Flower in Transit

When the red rose was crushed in the turrets
                                            of time in which blood trickled from thorny 
crowns of creation hooks and thorns set loose
                                             a pact with the devil lock stock and barrel

Petals dissolved in crimson powder once the
                                                 wicked wick alit the trigger sent laurels
of damnation six foot under rising to hell
                                                  a scorched lullaby and ballistic epitaph

Seeds were broken the covenant’s meaning
                                            abandoned before ink on agreed contracts 
had dried as perfumed bouquets reeked of steeled
                                                     metal dead skin and wanton demise

For that one moment though when she mounted the tank 
                                 and planted the flower she dreamt that the thorns
might get stuck in the hearts of transit’s deceit for to
                       change the trajectory and the smell of red roses to linger

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/7/2017 9:04:00 PM
This is the second of your poems I've read. Unlike most poems of mine, with meaning on the surface, yours need careful contemplation. I liked the last four lines....they brought me back to redemption...Thanks for the many visits to my work, Kai. I will be by to read more...
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Date: 3/6/2017 4:12:00 AM
You've turned darkness to light. I found this entry to have much beauty and I love the thought of anything being in transit and ready to bloom and transform like a butterfly. Well done throughout
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