Flower In Rapture-A Haiku

flower in rapture olfactory perception bee is near petal

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James Fraser

Date: 10/2/2020 1:51:00 PM

Love seeing such in gardens and parks :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/6/2019 6:49:00 PM

A lovely vision Rajat. I haven't seen you around much my friend. I hope you are well. Blessings for the new year! : ) xxoo

Eve Roper

Date: 7/27/2018 5:25:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this well written poem with great imagery, Rajat. I hope you and your family are doing well. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus

Date: 7/6/2018 2:26:00 AM

A pleasurable moment of anticipation, Rajat! Lovely! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2018 3:24:00 PM

very nice, Rajat.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 7/2/2018 2:50:00 PM

Nice one, Rajat :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/2/2018 2:05:00 PM

Lovely haiku, my friend! A flower expectantly awaits the arrival of a bee! What a vivid imagery you paint with your talented pen! Best regards. Pandita