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Flow With the Spirit of God El

Flow with the spirit of God! As a stream whose flow not flawed As oxygen pure benign That makes existence divine As the sky, sun, moon, and star As cosmos with no age bar Flow with the spirit of God! 09 July 2021 Elemental Poetry Contest Sponsored by: charles messina

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Howard Kerr

Date: 8/6/2021 1:35:00 AM

Congratulations Christuraj, on your excellent win. Thanks for your comment on my entry Howard

Marius Alexandru

Date: 7/31/2021 12:17:00 PM

a great poem, nicely written congratulations

Marilene Evans

Date: 7/31/2021 10:23:00 AM

Congratulations. What an uplifting poem.

Bhawana Pant

Date: 7/31/2021 9:57:00 AM

Congratulations!!As oxygen pure benign.That makes existence divine.Lovely lines..

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/31/2021 7:47:00 AM

Hi Christuraj, You've penned a well-written poem with a good message. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Charles Messina

Date: 7/31/2021 5:40:00 AM

Lovely write, Christuraj...Nice imagery with a wonderful flow. Congratulations on a fine win! Charlie

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/31/2021 5:37:00 AM

Lovely, Dear Friend. "Flow with the spirit of God!" - deep thoughts expressed. Congratulations on the placement.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 7/10/2021 1:38:00 PM

Christuraj, Very good. great flow. best of luck!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/10/2021 9:19:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/10/2021 7:11:00 AM

Wow! Superb! Well penned Chris. Best of luck for contest. I first sent a soup mail. Then saw you had not changed. Glad I told you, this is beautiful.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/10/2021 8:01:00 AM

Though winning is a different matter I highly price your thoughtfulness and the very careful way of correcting. I hope I will be of some help like you for others.

Constance La France

Date: 7/10/2021 6:34:00 AM

Christuraj, so grateful I visited this poem as it is lovely. Best of luck in the contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/10/2021 8:01:00 AM

Thank you very much.