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Flow of Rapture Collaboration with Probir Gupta Cascading along the coveted curves The flow of rapture proceeds in joy Sometimes halting and softly fondling Green grass turns pink for a while The air filled with tickled laughter Ventures through labyrinth fields As sun filters through the vast canopy Of leaves bathed a golden hue. Wet pure and crystal flows, With erratic beating of its heart Plummet down with wild booming roar Sending shivers racing down the covert on the banks Warm breath assaults the stony resolve Warm touches loosen the rocky rigidity Moving ahead raising a honey tremor A green and black swirl in the crazy head From head to toe a tumbling twist In each bend thick bushes of delight The coursing on brings out in its wake Purple orange and yellow stanzas Under an orange kissed sky Nature's essence, of harmony and rhythm A soul of perfection beneath shadowed shade and sigh The flow of rapture proceeds in joy 7/11/201

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Date: 7/20/2017 12:00:00 AM
Now this is what I call beauty at its height. Marvelous poem. My best regards to both of you.
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Date: 7/16/2017 3:24:00 AM
Oh, I only see this now. This is very beautiful. I love the last stanza. Fantastic collaboration.
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Date: 7/15/2017 6:21:00 AM
Another lovely collaboration, Eve and Probir:) this is exhilarating:)
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Date: 7/12/2017 2:33:00 AM
This is such a glorious collaboration. You work so well together as evidenced by this wonderful flowing piece! Bravo! : )
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Date: 7/11/2017 3:48:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful lines. Both of you did very well with this. A joy to read :)
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Date: 7/11/2017 3:02:00 PM
This is one "sweet" write! Just beautiful, so romantic:) You two make wonderful sparring partners. A most enjoyable read Mrs Eve and Probir. One of the very best collabs i have read!
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Date: 7/11/2017 2:29:00 PM
Nature as the Lord has created is now recreated in all its glory with this superb collaboration of two of my favored poets, Eve and my dear friend, Probir! A fav for me! Good luck my friends!
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Date: 7/11/2017 12:50:00 PM
This was vibrantly wonderful. So filled with beauty and soothing stanzas of solitude. You have brought nature glistening to us with your fine poetic collaboration. Bravo to you Eve and Probir. An incredible piece of writing.
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Date: 7/11/2017 12:24:00 PM
- A delightful poem, filled with beauty and joy - Beautiful painting of nature - Really a pleasure to read, Eve and Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/11/2017 12:34:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine, I am so glad Probir help me write this wonderful poem. ~*
Date: 7/11/2017 12:22:00 PM
Now that the collaboration is posted, I find myself honoured ... The rest the readers will say ...
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/11/2017 12:33:00 PM
Awe, thank you, Probir, it is a beautiful poem an was an honor write it with you my friend ~*

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