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Floral Haiku 5 7 19

dandelions held beside mother’s yellow dress — the russet sunset 5/7/2019

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Date: 5/8/2019 4:17:00 PM
'the russet sunset' - nice internal rhyme you did there, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2019 8:04:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 5/8/2019 4:33:00 AM
- Lovely yellow poem, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2019 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend! <3
Date: 5/7/2019 9:26:00 PM
Lovely imaged haiku, Kim! A dandy! ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2019 9:37:00 PM
Thanks! Easy first two lines! Took longer to come up with the final line! :)

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