Floods

dams of sky broken wombs of streams bulging, aching weak cowardice banks 27 July 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/3/2021 4:35:00 AM

Congratulations on another win! You are collecting them like hot cakes!

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/2/2021 7:23:00 PM

Creative imagery, Christuraj! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Marilene Evans

Date: 8/2/2021 10:58:00 AM

Congratulations. Powerful imagery.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/2/2021 10:50:00 AM

This is amazing Chris. Powerful images and phrases! Congratulations on your win.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 8/2/2021 6:37:00 AM

Congratulations! Your description is out of the box and creative

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/26/2021 8:54:00 PM

a beautifully penned haiku, Christuraj Well done.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/27/2021 5:56:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/26/2021 7:51:00 PM

Very interesting metaphors -- excellent write. The earh seems to hold nothing in stasis or ballance for long -- perhaps there is another answer?...each of us to restore our personal balance with our creator. Anyway...you got me thinking.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/26/2021 8:51:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2021 5:32:00 PM

profound one!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/26/2021 8:51:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/26/2021 3:59:00 PM

The fury of a storm is captured here in lovely detail, Christuraj. Evelyn :)

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/26/2021 8:52:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/26/2021 2:55:00 PM

Wow, this is some powerful poem.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/26/2021 8:52:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/26/2021 1:36:00 PM

SUPERB haiku, Christuraj! Janice

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/26/2021 8:52:00 PM

Thank you very much.