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Floating

Written: November 14, 2023 ___________________________________ A Stair Way To The Stars I Do Not Climb I Float I Float In Your Arms

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Date: 11/18/2023 9:11:00 AM
I remember commenting on this but seems its not here, so let me do it again, i find it impressive and really artistic how you do these shape poems so creatively: and the shape of a falling leaf here is so well presented. I love the words too: soul touching and evocative, congratulations on your win: well deserved
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Date: 11/15/2023 5:03:00 PM
Stunning poetry. Would be nice to climb, but better to look at the stars in somebody's arms. Love every word you write, because one word is enough . My dear Sotto you are poetry
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Date: 11/15/2023 10:37:00 AM
Nice floating poem.
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Date: 11/14/2023 8:57:00 PM
Nice shape poem, Sotto, you did a good job with this form of poetry. Bill
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