Get Your Premium Membership

Flirting With Free Verse

Formal forms feel nice and safe But meter makes me sweat Sometimes rhymes will grind and chafe And stresses makes me fret Perhaps there is another way? I need to be diverse Panzer stanzas made of clay? Or flirt with loose free verse ... To write without rules? Freedom! The shackles of rhyme snap open And clatter to the floor The ball and chain of meter and rhythm Slip off and roll away Through the septic puddle of conformity Clunks against the cell wall The solid steel door unbolts - one - two - three And squeals open Rust flakes bursting then falling Metallic leaves onto a metallic forest floor A breeze washes in - washes away the stale air A poster of Dr Seuss lifts, then flaps, then rips Then blows away Daylight streams in - bright - white - blinding - searing As fragile eyes adjust, the outside free-i-verse reveals itself Freedom? Yes. But what chaos! Repetition, imagery, metaphors and repetition - still there And rhyme and meter! Where should they go? What if I get it wrong? How will I know? I can't take it in! ... The door swings and closes - safe and secure The chill draft now whispers - certain and sure The shackles await me - to hold and embrace The ball and chain staring - a well meaning face Perhaps structure and form aren't really so bad Free verse is trendy, or maybe a fad From now on I'll stick to what I surely know Rhythm and meter and rhyme true to flow Or maybe I'll try again tomorrow... (Entry for the "flirt" contest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/18/2016 6:41:00 PM
HA. SO true. IN the end, the classic prevails! I actually wrote a sonnet once about how I feel more comfortable enclosed in "my little room" with sonnet rules imposed on me. Free verse is too big. Like stepping out of one's comfort zone and into a scary ocean. I have tried it and usually I sink! Very cool stuff.
Login to Reply
Martin Avatar
Mark Martin
Date: 12/19/2016 10:56:00 AM
Than!s Andrea! I'd like to try out a bit more free verse - maybe a paddling pool with water wings rather than the ocean - at least at first! :-)
Date: 12/18/2016 6:41:00 PM
I see it won. BIG congrats. It was a creative entry and well deserved.
Login to Reply
Martin Avatar
Mark Martin
Date: 12/18/2016 11:51:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! :-)
Date: 12/10/2016 1:36:00 PM
Impressive, congrats.
Login to Reply
Martin Avatar
Mark Martin
Date: 12/10/2016 1:49:00 PM
Thanks Richard! :-)
Date: 12/9/2016 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations, Mark! ...Fran
Login to Reply
Martin Avatar
Mark Martin
Date: 12/9/2016 11:52:00 AM
Thanks Fran! :-)
Date: 12/8/2016 9:47:00 PM
You were the only one to flirt with poetry itself Mark, a beautiful take on the theme, congratulations on your win
Login to Reply
Martin Avatar
Mark Martin
Date: 12/8/2016 11:29:00 PM
Thanks Lewis! Interesting contest! :-)
Date: 12/4/2016 2:10:00 PM
What a clever take on the flirting theme Mark - I only ever used to write with rhyme but now I flirt with other forms... but I think I need a lot of practice lol:-):-) hugs Jan xx7
Login to Reply
Martin Avatar
Mark Martin
Date: 12/4/2016 2:21:00 PM
Thanks Jan! I think free verse is easy to write, but hard to get right!
Date: 12/4/2016 12:35:00 AM
This is a WONDERFUL interpretation of flirting, and to me it is a winner. Love it :) A7 and fave.
Login to Reply
Martin Avatar
Mark Martin
Date: 12/4/2016 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Darren. I've recently experimented with free verse - this is an exaggeration of what's going through my head when I'm writing it! Need to keep reading more of other people's work and practising! :-)

Book: Shattered Sighs