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Flirtation

A backward glance A crimson blush A risked smile Feigned melancholy interest Sparkling eyes dance A wink and a nod Lips tenderly caress an Extended hand Dreamy intoxication Half in Love

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Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 10/5/2011 3:24:00 PM

emm...even the title had me interested...nice work my friend.beautiful pieces like this makes me want to come here regularly

Fabiyas M V

Date: 10/3/2011 11:32:00 AM

So warm and sweet,Lori.Nice and beautiful use of words,Lori

George Aul

Date: 9/20/2011 1:57:00 PM

I have to laugh at one thought - usually, I got thrown-up on from fully intoxication.... thanks for the nice comment......George

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2011 12:50:00 AM

Cool last line, only half in love, but it's SOMEthing anyway. Very nice buildup in this little poem!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/19/2011 9:17:00 PM

This has a medieval caress to it Lori, beautifully done; your adjectives are superlative.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/19/2011 4:29:00 PM

What a delight this poem is to read Lori. Your last line was genius. Thanks for your comments on my autumn poem.

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 9/18/2011 1:36:00 PM

Lori...this is beautiful...thanks for sharing this lovely poem...smiles..chiquita

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2011 9:44:00 AM

Interesting work..Very creative idea for a write....Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting..I appreciate you taking the time to do so..Sara

Robert Johnson

Date: 9/17/2011 8:56:00 AM

The wallflower blooms in the heat of the night. He blushes and flushes, it is quite a sight. There's not enough love to calm his advance. He's head over heals at this wondrous chance.