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FLIGHT OF AUTUMN

Autumn is time for kites to fly And turn the windmills of a dream A time to fly high up the sky Just like a fountain on a stream Go flap your wings and fly away Autumn is time for kites to fly Not everyday's a holiday So cast your mark before you die Your dreams may be so wild and high And path you take is so extreme Autumn is time for kites to fly Fill your world with glorious scream Glory is what you're bound to take So flap your wings, make not a sigh Go up and make your dreams awake Autumn is time for kites to fly Quatern poetry contest 2nd place

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/6/2023 5:37:00 PM

Dear R. B., your vivid poem captures the beauty of Autumn with stunning imagery. I especially enjoyed "turn the windmills of a dream" and your refrain "Autumn is time for kites to fly" is blissful. Congratulations for your excellent win in Joseph's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

R. B. Cawis
Date: 12/6/2023 9:03:00 PM

Thank you very much... As I was describing autumn, I wanted to make it inspirational...

Joseph May

Date: 12/3/2023 12:10:00 PM

Congrats on your win RB, Very nicely penned

R. B. Cawis
Date: 12/4/2023 7:33:00 AM

Thank you very much...

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/14/2023 12:10:00 PM

This is a lovely quatern autumnal poem Roger with a great title too. Some wonderful lines,’ And turn the windmills of a dream’ ‘Autumn is time for kites to fly’ . The poem flowed well and I could easily picture the kite flying high. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Hope you’re having a great autumn. :):)

R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/14/2023 2:16:00 PM

Thank you very much... I wanted to make it inspirational like the flying of kite... There's no autumn season in our country though, windy season is either part of sunny or rainy season, but mostly rainy... But in my place right now it's very windy like I actually experience autumn season... Leaves fall everywhere...