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Fleurs ou Fleurs devant un portrait - Matisse

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Practice writing for fear I'll forget what to do... I may try these forced efforts in an attempt to revive the poet in me.
Who would ignore a giraffe? Place it off-centre and perhaps I would, on a particularly grey day where I was all but disappearing myself "Please point it out to me," I might say, all the colour returning to my face, joie de vivre leaping into the essence of me as you and I see what we want to see It's so easy to get swallowed up in patterns when everything becomes wallpaper, including ourselves, until we just snap out of it— momentarily, start to look around Darkness may crouch and stick to the edges it sets everything off, that contrast danger lurking low, it's the weirdest thing until you let your focus slide to be suddenly aware that everything is in colour Forget what's captured fades, wilts, tarnishes or breaks every second there is less in the pattern of it but right now, there is a chance to be distracted at least

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Date: 10/10/2024 12:28:00 PM
Did you like it? Fading doesn't help appreciation. Yet, he has a famous name. Matisse is very popular. His style is hypnotic. I enjoy your vision.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/10/2024 4:57:00 PM
I like the gray counterpoint.
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/10/2024 4:33:00 PM
Thanks Hilda, not one I'd put on display but one I'm happy to contemplate. I enjoyed the greys into colour and consideration of whether that involves choice or not. Thank you for your comment

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