Skat A Poet Free verse

Flawless

FLAWLESS


A flawless world. Giving by your mother
Humanity holding hands like lovers.
Strung out deep into the sign of religion.
A flawless day at the park feeding pigeons
Attracting the positive light from the sun.
Where Global warming is undone.

A place where beauty is not found in the face.
Flawless beyond the mystery of space.
'Love' will be a feeling no one will resist.
'Hate' will be a word that won't exist.
Handing out smiles on a silver plate.
A world opened to the  golden gate.
Flawless like the wind brushing my hair.
Where my heart is filled with the warmness of care.

A flawless victory, even if we must die!

A flawless world, in a flawless dream.
Now wake me up before I scream.

~SKAT~

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David Scott December 16, 2019 at 6:48 AM get decent people in power maybe these dreams will come true for us all xxxxxx

David Scott December 16, 2019 at 6:47 AM beautiful write very dream like gives a sense oof time and space davidscott

James Inman March 26, 2017 at 7:54 AM Hi SKAT, just thought I'd visit. Perhaps you were having a vision as apposed to a dream here. The future of humanity? I'm sure it won't include me, lol.

Amanda Teague January 16, 2016 at 6:39 PM very good

Paul Callus October 28, 2015 at 9:30 AM That's what we dreamed about in the 60s when we shouted out loud that we wanted a better world in which war had no place and peace was most welcome. We are still dreaming...paul

Jack Horn July 20, 2015 at 8:27 PM Dear Scat, Jack Horn saying ,quite the writer You are. PEOPLE will see your work From the One Stop Fitting Shop .. (ALLFITTINGSHOP.TK ) Mims Page. Thanks Again for your excellent comment Jack Horn ( jackattack )

Ezekiel Otiato March 21, 2015 at 12:45 PM Great poem Skat, flawless rhythm indeed. Thank you for sharing.

Christine Saunders February 26, 2015 at 1:58 PM One word Skat, amazing!

Bill Smith February 15, 2015 at 12:07 PM Cool poem Skat, only here for a visit.

Ana Espinola Collins April 16, 2014 at 7:30 PM Hi Skat...Awesome ending....I really enjoyed this poem :) Ana

Robin Davis March 20, 2014 at 10:00 PM SKAT Don't wake up. Stay in this flawless world until the real world can be like your dream. Thanks for the great comment on my Pirates Plea poem. Hugs

Mr King February 13, 2014 at 2:02 AM nice poem! thanks for sharing

Justin Bordner January 27, 2014 at 7:56 PM I respect the apparent ambivelance in this poem Skat, it seems to say, isn't potential just divine when realized, and then the victor takes a breath and thinks to herself, damn, whats there to fight for now! Another unique and challenging write. J.A.B.

Patricia L Graham January 14, 2014 at 7:40 AM "... where beauty is not found in the face" - if only our actions had more love in purpose. Hmm ... I'd scream because the reality isn't near flawless. Thanks for the welcome Skat.

Ayesha Akhtar January 3, 2014 at 12:27 AM haha ;) just the perfect way to wake up :) thats why it is said Imperfection is beauty :)))

Mark Peterson November 5, 2013 at 12:20 AM Nicely ended. Reading your poetry gives me precious moments to enjoy things as they could be instead of how they really are. Thanks for the interlude.

Vincent Flannery November 3, 2013 at 7:02 AM Another great poem. I just didn't want to wake up. Great perspective!

Anne Hessler October 25, 2013 at 9:30 AM ya if everything were perfect that would annoy me too i really like you poetry

Kelly Deschler September 26, 2013 at 1:42 PM There is no place that exists which can be flawless. Except maybe heaven! Wonderfully written poem, SKAT, this gives the reader much to ponder on!...Thank you for the nice comments, as always! Love, Kelly :)

Sara Kendrick September 18, 2013 at 4:08 PM Flawless doesn't exsist now but someday this will be a great world in which to live..Thanks for stopping by ..Your comments are uplifting..Great work that you have penned..Sara

Emily Schaffer August 23, 2013 at 10:31 PM Amazing vision! I loved it :)

Mafata Dunbar July 15, 2013 at 4:23 AM Thanks for the encouraging words, I'm honored tohave you comment on my poem. YoYou're such an inspiring person with beautiful words of wisdom which is evident as I go through you work, true artists I say..... Amazing and thanks.

Terry-Ann Coley July 9, 2013 at 3:04 PM Beautifully written, I felt it right through!

Poet Destroyer A July 7, 2013 at 9:40 AM no! ;-)

Mustapha Mohammed June 15, 2013 at 7:22 AM This poem would have to be my favourite from you.Its such a dynamic one.I love the energy I feel here,wonderful!

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