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FLAWLESS

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FLAWLESS

 FLAWLESS


A flawless world. Giving by your mother
Humanity holding hands like lovers.
Strung out deep into the sign of religion.
A flawless day at the park feeding pigeons
Attracting the positive light from the sun.
Where Global warming is undone.

A place where beauty is not found in the face.
Flawless beyond the mystery of space.
'Love' will be a feeling no one will resist.
'Hate' will be a word that won't exist.
Handing out smiles on a silver plate.
A world opened to the  golden gate.
Flawless like the wind brushing my hair.
Where my heart is filled with the warmness of care.

A flawless victory, even if we must die!

A flawless world, in a flawless dream.
Now wake me up before I scream.

~SKAT~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 3/26/2017 7:54:00 AM
Hi SKAT, just thought I'd visit. Perhaps you were having a vision as apposed to a dream here. The future of humanity? I'm sure it won't include me, lol.
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Date: 1/16/2016 6:39:00 PM
very good
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Date: 10/28/2015 9:30:00 AM
That's what we dreamed about in the 60s when we shouted out loud that we wanted a better world in which war had no place and peace was most welcome. We are still dreaming...paul
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Date: 7/20/2015 8:27:00 PM
Dear Scat, Jack Horn saying ,quite the writer You are. PEOPLE will see your work From the One Stop Fitting Shop .. (ALLFITTINGSHOP.TK ) Mims Page. Thanks Again for your excellent comment Jack Horn ( jackattack )
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Date: 3/21/2015 12:45:00 PM
Great poem Skat, flawless rhythm indeed. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 2/26/2015 1:58:00 PM
One word Skat, amazing!
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Date: 2/15/2015 12:07:00 PM
Cool poem Skat, only here for a visit.
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Date: 4/16/2014 7:30:00 PM
Hi Skat...Awesome ending....I really enjoyed this poem :) Ana
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Date: 3/20/2014 10:00:00 PM
SKAT Don't wake up. Stay in this flawless world until the real world can be like your dream. Thanks for the great comment on my Pirates Plea poem. Hugs
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Date: 2/13/2014 2:02:00 AM
nice poem! thanks for sharing
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Date: 1/27/2014 7:56:00 PM
I respect the apparent ambivelance in this poem Skat, it seems to say, isn't potential just divine when realized, and then the victor takes a breath and thinks to herself, damn, whats there to fight for now! Another unique and challenging write. J.A.B.
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Date: 1/14/2014 7:40:00 AM
"... where beauty is not found in the face" - if only our actions had more love in purpose. Hmm ... I'd scream because the reality isn't near flawless. Thanks for the welcome Skat.
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Date: 1/3/2014 12:27:00 AM
haha ;) just the perfect way to wake up :) thats why it is said Imperfection is beauty :)))
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Date: 11/5/2013 12:20:00 AM
Nicely ended. Reading your poetry gives me precious moments to enjoy things as they could be instead of how they really are. Thanks for the interlude.
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Date: 11/3/2013 7:02:00 AM
Another great poem. I just didn't want to wake up. Great perspective!
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Date: 10/25/2013 9:30:00 AM
ya if everything were perfect that would annoy me too i really like you poetry
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Date: 9/26/2013 1:42:00 PM
There is no place that exists which can be flawless. Except maybe heaven! Wonderfully written poem, SKAT, this gives the reader much to ponder on!...Thank you for the nice comments, as always! Love, Kelly :)
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Date: 9/18/2013 4:08:00 PM
Flawless doesn't exsist now but someday this will be a great world in which to live..Thanks for stopping by ..Your comments are uplifting..Great work that you have penned..Sara
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Date: 8/23/2013 10:31:00 PM
Amazing vision! I loved it :)
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Date: 7/15/2013 4:23:00 AM
Thanks for the encouraging words, I'm honored tohave you comment on my poem. YoYou're such an inspiring person with beautiful words of wisdom which is evident as I go through you work, true artists I say..... Amazing and thanks.
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Date: 7/9/2013 3:04:00 PM
Beautifully written, I felt it right through!
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Date: 7/7/2013 9:40:00 AM
no! ;-)
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Date: 6/15/2013 7:22:00 AM
This poem would have to be my favourite from you.Its such a dynamic one.I love the energy I feel here,wonderful!
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Date: 5/25/2013 12:03:00 PM
Flawless from various corners. This world is in real sense. Excellent beauty of your heartfelt sense adorned very cutely. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/6/2013 9:00:00 PM
Its great to dream Skat, we become flawed for losing sight of that dream, nicely done, blessings Carl
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