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Flawed and Flawless

Flawed, like the last steps of women and men, Walking towards trouble without a guide, Still unable to let go of their pride, Which has always been the source of their sin. Flawless, like the first step of a child, when Holding on to those standing by his side. A small hand looking for a place to hide, Because he accepts this help with a grin. Flawed, just like the mistakes made in the past, Because those foot steps were taken in haste, Headed in the wrong direction too fast! Flawless are the feet that just got a taste Of freedom, while making the moment last, Since he does not have a moment to waste!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 5:02:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement Doc, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 3:53:00 PM
Hey, those were great comparisons you made on the topic, Dakarai. Nice to see an Italian sonnet win in a contest. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/6/2011 9:08:00 AM
I just wanted to take a minute to thank everyone for their support, and most importantly Mama S.K.A.T for such a wonderful contest. Hopefully I can put one together soon. Thanks guys.
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Date: 2/5/2011 4:42:00 AM
Many congratulations Dakari on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:29:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) D.C.~on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:55:00 PM
Very nicely done. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in this entry.
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:24:00 AM
Hi Dakari - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, dakarai. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations onn the well deserved win in the contest, dakarai
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:19:00 AM
Deeply profound - simply SENSATIONAL! Congrats on your big win, Dakari. Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:37:00 AM
Congrats Dakarai on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write my friend.. where u been luv? enjoy..
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:29:00 AM
Well done. Very well written and very well said of the flawed and flawless actions of all of us. Congratulations on your winning position in the contest. Best wishes. Deb
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Date: 2/3/2011 11:52:00 PM
DAKARAI~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat
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