Flashing

Flash A burst of intense light Flash A person streaking without clothes Flash A quick rush of water Flash A large bolt of lightning Even though there are similar Flashes They each have their own uniqueness Though they each seem to be innocent They are each negative in every aspect Russell Sivey

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Don Johnson

Date: 9/11/2011 12:54:00 AM

Of course you know this flashing verse, produced my flash an stole your thunder, but poems are generated by the words we see, a constant source of wonder???

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/10/2011 7:13:00 PM

wise words Russell.. and as an Italian who cooks a lot.. flash in the frying pan ..olive oil splatters..not good if it splatters on fingers.. another negative.. awesome connotations my friend...

Jack Horne

Date: 9/10/2011 11:28:00 AM

Insightful piece, my friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2011 11:06:00 PM

hmmm, what's negative about a person running naked? hahaha. Luv ya!

John Smith

Date: 9/9/2011 10:14:00 PM

The hot ones come late in life.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2011 7:22:00 PM

Yes, each thing can be good or bad..Lightning brings nitrogen to the earth and greens everthing up but it can kill, set things on fire, and put people without power for hours..Enjoyed reading your thoughts this eve...Your presence at my work was encouraging..May your gifted pen overflow onto the pages of soup with an increased release..Sara

Don Johnson

Date: 9/9/2011 6:41:00 PM

Flashing is a moment seen, lightening flash, some guy obscene, who did the bolt 4 god and queen, but gone in a split second mean:) interesting concept mate!