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~~ashes disgorge many flee her fiery darts awaits her slumber~~

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Daver Austin

Date: 9/9/2010 10:29:00 AM

This could be a girl or a volcano, right? Anywho - I did enjoy. Love, Dave

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/9/2010 7:06:00 AM

yikes! this sure can be taken figuratively or literally-- now I am not sure which would be worse-- a woman or a volcano? if it were a sleeping beastie (who you woke up & it's not yet time to wake up--but of cuorse knowing me, I am awake though I am feeling sleepy right now), better be afraid-- be very very afraid--bwahahaha-- stop calling me that pretty please??? you're putting it EVERYWHERE (O.o) I already stopped calling you WilMA. ;)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/9/2010 5:07:00 AM

enjoyed reading today.

Joy Wellington

Date: 9/8/2010 9:27:00 PM

Thanks for your comments Wilma, your poems are easily read and understood. Will be checking out more of your work. All the best. Joy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2010 6:59:00 PM

sounds like a volcano!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/8/2010 1:27:00 PM

lovely one, enjoyed your write...P.D.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/8/2010 12:34:00 PM

So vibrant and visual Wilma... sounds like a heart on fire as well luv.. waiting for it to cool down its essence..luv.. enjoyed.. this great emotional Haiku..

James Fraser

Date: 9/8/2010 10:12:00 AM

Fire sure drives and maims so many animals Wilma. And the marvel of natures anew, as shoots break through the dark ebony embers > wonderful Haiku >> James