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Flaming June, Frederic Leighton 1895

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the flames haven't burnt out; they can be rekindled active embers that lay beneath what is seen fuel and oxygen equals flames just as this form and this aura produce magic though she lays sleeping, she lights the room every aspect of her resonates with life I gaze upon the fabric that drapes across her as she rests nothing that touches her skin can fail to become beautiful also she falls artfully into slumber the very representation of a dream as the shimmers of a thousand sunsets shroud and surround her comfort she finds in her own frame equilibrium: the stillness that breath may or may not disrupt so I dare not breathe for I do not wish to disturb this beauty may she exist forevermore resplendent as evening sun for she transcends what it is to be mortal

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Date: 12/28/2023 8:44:00 AM
Dear Dilly Dally, even without this stunning portrait for reference, your poem is exquisite as it captures and ignites the imagination with the beauty of femininity and it’s feminine fire.. and appreciation. Breathtaking imagery and emotion! Your golden pen blazes like the noon time sun at the height of summer, dear poetess! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brain's contest. Warmest wishes for a happy new year filled with light, peace and poetic inspiration.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/28/2023 11:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan, your comments are always a delight. This really was focussing on the joy of truly appreciating another person and how some just have a magic about them Thank you for your kind words x
Date: 8/16/2023 8:53:00 PM
Wow! Stupendous! Congratulations, DD:)
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Date: 8/16/2023 9:36:00 PM
Aww thank you Jo! Pulling out all the best compliments :)
Date: 8/16/2023 12:33:00 PM
nothing that touches her skin … the very representation of a dream…lovely! Congratulations, DD!
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Date: 8/16/2023 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Kim x
Date: 8/14/2023 9:36:00 PM
Wonderfully captured this painting, love this :)
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Date: 8/14/2023 9:55:00 PM
Thank you, I so enjoyed writing this one x
Date: 8/13/2023 7:14:00 AM
Lovely D.D. .
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Date: 8/13/2023 2:31:00 PM
Thank you, it was delightful to contemplate this painting x

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